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Surrender

Surrender                                                                                                              
 
Your celestial figure reclined in the tub  
Cherubic lips parted in a sigh  
Candles glow, flames dancing  
The candlelight casting your form  
In ethereal luster  
My Botticelli Venus  
Emerging from the canvas  
Alive and breathing  
The Madonna incarnate  
My masculine spirit feeling your femininity  
The aura of your womanliness  
Filling my aching male body with familiar hunger  
Drawing me like a magnet  
My heart seeking the little death  
When our souls merge  
Our marriage consummated  
In this our church of desire  
 
Your pastel cheeks are so angelic  
Your soft brown eyes gazing up at me  
Ochre curls cascading down your bird delicate shoulders  
Your creamy hills capped with rose buds  
Threads of water tracing lines across your mounds  
Glittering gold in the candlelight  
Your rosy cheeks aflame with passion  
The blush of love painted across your scarlet body  
My heart thumping, a mad beat  
Blood pulsing through my web of arteries  
My fingers tingling with life  
My masculinity climbing in the sun of your femininity  
 
I ponder what words will sink into you  
What key will unlock your heart  
My golden body wrapped in silk  
As you gaze with tender craving  
My robe slips into a pile at my feet  
A smile illuminates your face  
I kneel in reverence by your side  
Passing the wet cloth around your heaving breasts  
Gently persuading your body to share my craving  
But you were already thirsting for my touch  
Your response is so heated  
   
As you guide my hand to your love triangle  
Your sex potent with sensitivity  
Ferocious yearning gleaming in your eyes  
Lips pursed with purpose  
I want to pull you into my orbit  
Complete the journey we have set out on  
Your legs part in acceptance  
Of the sacredness of the moment  
Pregnant with the Goddess  
I open your flower in my agile fingers  
Penetrating your fissure  
My fingers ringing your stamen  
 
"My love", I whisper  
"Say, you are mine."  
Your voice cracks as the words begin to form  
Then dissipate in a chorus of moans  
Your cries of passion reverberate through my body  
Vibrations echoing down my spine  
Your thighs wet with the sap  
That sparkles in your bath water beads  
On your mother of pearl  
Where rivers of luminescence  
Glow between your knees  
I dab my fingers into your wetness  
My fingers glisten in the candlelight  
Your smirk coaxing me onward  
Eager tongue licking your ambrosia  
From my tingling digits  
The gift of your procreative essence
In this erotic Eucharist  
Received on your wet tongue  
Submitting to my tender ministration  
Intimately feeding on our shared life force  
 
As you lie prostrate below me  
Your lustrous eyes beg to surrender  
The language of want communicated  
In my hand gingerly caressing your nipples  
Arcing down your stomach  
Passing through your forest of dark curls  
Tracing the petals of your orchid  
Downward to the cleft of your moons  
Rising, I gravitate to your lips  
The sweetness of our kiss  
My feather-soft touch  
On the ripened fruit of your sex  
   
Consuming you in a blush of flames  
 
Your words spilling like seeds of ardor  
Gushing from your longing heart  
"My love, I am yours"  
Your tears come like a soft spring rain  
Speaking eternal love  
My answer, “I will cherish you  
In timeless enchantment, until the hourglass is empty,  
and the merged rivers of our lives flow out into the sea."
Written by goldenmyst
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