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Obsession
There are moments I must confess,
time stands still when you are
looking at me.
I’m compelled to surrender
myself to those pools
of hazel captivity.
Where I may quench this all
consuming thirst you have
created within me.
I yearn to be completely
immersed, bound by the weight
of your ecstasy.
Wanting all of you and nothing
less to every imaginable
degree.
time stands still when you are
looking at me.
I’m compelled to surrender
myself to those pools
of hazel captivity.
Where I may quench this all
consuming thirst you have
created within me.
I yearn to be completely
immersed, bound by the weight
of your ecstasy.
Wanting all of you and nothing
less to every imaginable
degree.
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Re. Obsession
27th Aug 2022 6:05am
Where the soft whispers of rapture
Blends with a compulsive hunger to ravish the soul of another
Lies the undulated passion of unrequited lust
You really defined that word and all its beautiful emotional sentiments to bear
Good morning, and enjoy your weekend, my poet
Blends with a compulsive hunger to ravish the soul of another
Lies the undulated passion of unrequited lust
You really defined that word and all its beautiful emotional sentiments to bear
Good morning, and enjoy your weekend, my poet
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Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 10:47pm
Thank you dear lady for your wonderful comment. I am glad you could see it and feel it as I meant it.
Keith
Keith
Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 11:26pm
Re. Obsession
27th Aug 2022 6:33am
Notenough,
This poem is a passion of ah darkly truth, within the secret my luva I ah do ah want u oooooo. This is a piece of an ah divine of ah time put within it on the ah focus ah grind. Even if it was only minutes to write, it still ah seem that the mind had to gather thoughts mentally ah heartly believe me. I could feel the deepness of your ah soul and the want you put in this under control. This is work incredible yeah I tell u the truth. And, keep up the brilliant work said from me to u so cool. 🌷💋🌈👍🍑👅👁️🤎🤍🤜🤛🍹🍻🍺🥃🥂🎶💎🥦🌽🥬🥥🍜
This poem is a passion of ah darkly truth, within the secret my luva I ah do ah want u oooooo. This is a piece of an ah divine of ah time put within it on the ah focus ah grind. Even if it was only minutes to write, it still ah seem that the mind had to gather thoughts mentally ah heartly believe me. I could feel the deepness of your ah soul and the want you put in this under control. This is work incredible yeah I tell u the truth. And, keep up the brilliant work said from me to u so cool. 🌷💋🌈👍🍑👅👁️🤎🤍🤜🤛🍹🍻🍺🥃🥂🎶💎🥦🌽🥬🥥🍜
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Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 10:48pm
Thank you so much for the read sir.
I really appreciate the time that went
into your thoughtful comment.
Keith
I really appreciate the time that went
into your thoughtful comment.
Keith
Re: Re. Obsession
30th Aug 2022 5:01am
U welcome bruh. I mistake u also for being a girl. My bad also. But, this is Doctorial brilliant focus thought writing.👍🤛🤜🤍🍻🍺🥂🍹🎶💎
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Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 10:49pm
Firstly thank you for stopping
by and giving me a read.
I hope to be returning the
favor soon.
Keith
by and giving me a read.
I hope to be returning the
favor soon.
Keith
Re. Obsession
27th Aug 2022 4:34pm
Obsession can be dangerous but fun. Beautiful piece. I felt it in my soul. Whoever you’re obsessed with is one lucky and blessed girl. 💜💜💜💜
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Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 10:53pm
Yes it can be dangerous but the heart
is a fickle thing. It wants what it wants
no matter if it’s obtainable or not.
Thank you for the read
Keith
is a fickle thing. It wants what it wants
no matter if it’s obtainable or not.
Thank you for the read
Keith
Re. Obsession
27th Aug 2022 5:50pm
Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 10:54pm
Thank you so much my friend
for the read and the comment.
I’m so happy your could see it.
Keith
for the read and the comment.
I’m so happy your could see it.
Keith
Re. Obsession
Oh yes, please..
To be so very lost within the arms of exquisite and abundant passion, is to find the heart of happiness, imo. You captured the essence so well and vividly, Keith.
Thank you for sharing yourself and some beautifully penned desire with us.
Just lovely.
🌹 💙
B
To be so very lost within the arms of exquisite and abundant passion, is to find the heart of happiness, imo. You captured the essence so well and vividly, Keith.
Thank you for sharing yourself and some beautifully penned desire with us.
Just lovely.
🌹 💙
B
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Re: Re. Obsession
29th Aug 2022 10:45pm
I truly appreciate the read
and your thoughts on it.
I am so happy u liked it.
Keith
and your thoughts on it.
I am so happy u liked it.
Keith
Re. Obsession
31st Aug 2022 1:33am
What sensual romantic imagery. I love the tenderness of surrendering looking into her eyes.
Getting lost in those pools of hazel... That makes the heart flutter...
To have that effect on someone is so beautiful. Creating that desire in her... the same desires you have,
to get completely immersed bound in ecstasy. Sharing every part with you, and vice versa.
Getting lost in those pools of hazel... That makes the heart flutter...
To have that effect on someone is so beautiful. Creating that desire in her... the same desires you have,
to get completely immersed bound in ecstasy. Sharing every part with you, and vice versa.
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Re. Obsession
31st Aug 2022 4:26pm
Thank you for you thoughtful comment.
You always offer your insight and it is
truly appreciated.
Keith
You always offer your insight and it is
truly appreciated.
Keith
Re. Obsession
31st Aug 2022 4:57pm
Thank you for you thoughtful comment.
You always offer your insight and it is
truly appreciated.
Keith
You always offer your insight and it is
truly appreciated.
Keith