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Beautiful moments
I think
of all the moments
that had to align
to bring us here
to one another
it’s in these
beautiful moments
that I wish
I could stop time
just to even have
one more second
with you
of all the moments
that had to align
to bring us here
to one another
it’s in these
beautiful moments
that I wish
I could stop time
just to even have
one more second
with you
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- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
26th Aug 2022 3:29pm
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26th Aug 2022 3:50pm
Re. Beautiful moments
26th Aug 2022 8:57pm
Dear JC,
I really appreciated how this lovely write physically made me stop to give thanks for all my loved ones. Moments are so fleeting. I enjoyed the gratitude and love in this piece. H🌷
I really appreciated how this lovely write physically made me stop to give thanks for all my loved ones. Moments are so fleeting. I enjoyed the gratitude and love in this piece. H🌷
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30th Aug 2022 7:14pm
Re. Beautiful moments
26th Aug 2022 11:29pm
Reminds me of an old song, "Time in a Bottle" by Jim Croce. Your poem definitely has the same vibe. 🌼
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30th Aug 2022 7:14pm
Re. Beautiful moments
26th Aug 2022 11:47pm
Moments shared are memories made that we can enjoyed over and over again.
I get the time stand still part because those moments are so precious and seem to pass to quickly.
Loved the write
~NE~
I get the time stand still part because those moments are so precious and seem to pass to quickly.
Loved the write
~NE~
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30th Aug 2022 7:15pm
Re. Beautiful moments
29th Aug 2022 3:20am
Hi JC
This is so lovely and how you expressed with your words.
Having those extra moments of time would mean the world:)
This is so lovely and how you expressed with your words.
Having those extra moments of time would mean the world:)
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30th Aug 2022 7:15pm
Re. Beautiful moments
31st Aug 2022 6:22pm
For me, it all comes down to moments, just a string of moments, so many that we take for granted, some few that stand out, stamped upon our hearts. I often write about that, the big moments and the silence between them. 💖
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31st Aug 2022 6:26pm
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31st Aug 2022 6:28pm
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31st Aug 2022 6:31pm