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Open Door
When I open the door, your mouth hit the floor.
As I stand before you naked.
I'm the forbidden fruit, that look good enough to eat. You drop to your knees and start kissing my feet, telling me what a beautiful Bahamian Queen that I be.
I grab your hand, leading you to the bedroom.
As I walk in front of you my ass twitches from the left to the right. You bite your lip in the anticipation of the love we'll be making.
We get to the bedroom, you try to take lead, I say no baby this is my fantasy "Let me cater to you"
I start kissing you while throwing you to the bed.
I slowly remove your pants with my mouth, getting ready to give you some GREAT head.
I start kissing your ears, neck, and chest, letting my tongue work its way down to your package, that I'm happy to expect. Your manhood stands at attention, I grin with excitement.
I slowly put your cock in my mouth, you moan baby this is hot, damn I love the way you suck my cock. You begging babe I want to suck your cunt
I turn around to give you what you want.
I mount my pussy on your face, giving you a sweet taste. We begin to 69, you mumble baby I'm going to make you mines. It's getting hot and steamy ......
You can't take it no more, you turn my ass over and devour my flower. You lick my pussy in the shape of a 8 saying I taste like cake.
Your tongue explores my sweet, sweet fruit.
I begin to moan softly, you smile that I sound cute. You throw my legs on your shoulder, I grab your shift and guide it into my clit.
We both let out moans of ecstasy as you enter my pleasure land. Your mouth meets my nipples, you begin to suck my breast, while I'm screaming out your the best! You can't endure the way I'm throwing back my hips mmm......prefect timing I'm almost there but I'm waiting on you.
You say I'm about to cum boo. I feel all your blood rushing to your starting point.
All your joints being to lock, I wrap my legs around your waist, giving you my warm embrace.
We both scream out as we bust. You whisper baby there's no doubt your the best, you put everyone to rest!
As I stand before you naked.
I'm the forbidden fruit, that look good enough to eat. You drop to your knees and start kissing my feet, telling me what a beautiful Bahamian Queen that I be.
I grab your hand, leading you to the bedroom.
As I walk in front of you my ass twitches from the left to the right. You bite your lip in the anticipation of the love we'll be making.
We get to the bedroom, you try to take lead, I say no baby this is my fantasy "Let me cater to you"
I start kissing you while throwing you to the bed.
I slowly remove your pants with my mouth, getting ready to give you some GREAT head.
I start kissing your ears, neck, and chest, letting my tongue work its way down to your package, that I'm happy to expect. Your manhood stands at attention, I grin with excitement.
I slowly put your cock in my mouth, you moan baby this is hot, damn I love the way you suck my cock. You begging babe I want to suck your cunt
I turn around to give you what you want.
I mount my pussy on your face, giving you a sweet taste. We begin to 69, you mumble baby I'm going to make you mines. It's getting hot and steamy ......
You can't take it no more, you turn my ass over and devour my flower. You lick my pussy in the shape of a 8 saying I taste like cake.
Your tongue explores my sweet, sweet fruit.
I begin to moan softly, you smile that I sound cute. You throw my legs on your shoulder, I grab your shift and guide it into my clit.
We both let out moans of ecstasy as you enter my pleasure land. Your mouth meets my nipples, you begin to suck my breast, while I'm screaming out your the best! You can't endure the way I'm throwing back my hips mmm......prefect timing I'm almost there but I'm waiting on you.
You say I'm about to cum boo. I feel all your blood rushing to your starting point.
All your joints being to lock, I wrap my legs around your waist, giving you my warm embrace.
We both scream out as we bust. You whisper baby there's no doubt your the best, you put everyone to rest!
Published 26th Mar 2012
| Edited 1st Apr 2012
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26th Mar 2012 4:28am
........in those sensual hot ways with these words. You're gonna' create a mutual fire in the night tonight.......
spring is here and the sap is rising
spring is here and the sap is rising
26th Mar 2012 5:18am
Lol thanks for reading :-) it's suppose to light your fire lol that's why I write
26th Mar 2012 4:32am
This reads more like a short story! Maybe your future spans across multiple forms of writing? Open door that holds forbidden fruit---nice contrast!
26th Mar 2012 5:20am
26th Mar 2012 5:37am
that was so seductive indeed
with each line more desire was freed
i imagined myself there taking the lead
with the hunger of horniness from your lips i do feed
through aggressive tongue action your addicted to the speed
both legs tightly hooked under my arms & your back arched higher than weed
& i eat vigorously as to demonstrate greed
OHHH GOOODESSTTT DAMMMM you scream & you plead
your legs get tighter & tighter & i can barely breathe
hold it just a second boo & your legs grip is less tight
i almost drowned in this puddle that looks as if weve been fucking all night
by my hands you pull me on you & i put up no fight
then slowly i sink my battleship all the way out of sight
& that arch in your back just reached a new height
then i deeply & passionately stroke you will all of my might
you say do that shit daddy yeah fuck me right
& all the sweat & juices has your bohemian brown glowing bright
& with orgasm after orgasm....you finally see the light....;)
with each line more desire was freed
i imagined myself there taking the lead
with the hunger of horniness from your lips i do feed
through aggressive tongue action your addicted to the speed
both legs tightly hooked under my arms & your back arched higher than weed
& i eat vigorously as to demonstrate greed
OHHH GOOODESSTTT DAMMMM you scream & you plead
your legs get tighter & tighter & i can barely breathe
hold it just a second boo & your legs grip is less tight
i almost drowned in this puddle that looks as if weve been fucking all night
by my hands you pull me on you & i put up no fight
then slowly i sink my battleship all the way out of sight
& that arch in your back just reached a new height
then i deeply & passionately stroke you will all of my might
you say do that shit daddy yeah fuck me right
& all the sweat & juices has your bohemian brown glowing bright
& with orgasm after orgasm....you finally see the light....;)
26th Mar 2012 5:53am
Usually I have a response for you goodest but I'm left speechless lol its like you read my mind 3 of your lines are similar to mines in my next poem twisted ;-)
