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Tell Me Your Dreams
tell me your dreams
love
the idle wanders of your mind which seem to take you so far
into a distance known only by you
but desired by me
a sharing
of that most intimate thing
the seeking of a lifetime
for it seems I’ve always wanted to know
you
love
the idle wanders of your mind which seem to take you so far
into a distance known only by you
but desired by me
a sharing
of that most intimate thing
the seeking of a lifetime
for it seems I’ve always wanted to know
you
Published 25th Aug 2022
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26th Aug 2022 3:29am
Dear AJ,
Well, my dream is to start with breakfast in bed. Then roll over for a short nap followed by lunch in bed with an online shopping extravaganza as dessert before ordering dinner. In bed. 😃
This “the idle wanders of your mind which seem to take you so far into a distance known only by you” is the stuff of poetry. I love this phrase. What I can always count on is the soft beauty in your writing that makes me yearn for more romance. This poem is truly lovely. H🌷
Well, my dream is to start with breakfast in bed. Then roll over for a short nap followed by lunch in bed with an online shopping extravaganza as dessert before ordering dinner. In bed. 😃
This “the idle wanders of your mind which seem to take you so far into a distance known only by you” is the stuff of poetry. I love this phrase. What I can always count on is the soft beauty in your writing that makes me yearn for more romance. This poem is truly lovely. H🌷
26th Aug 2022 10:06am
What could be more romantic than online shopping in bed? Why didn't I think of that? 🌼😁😂😂
26th Aug 2022 3:11pm
26th Aug 2022 9:21pm
27th Aug 2022 5:30pm
The abridged version: small mews of lust that grow exponentially, consecrated trust and being seen like only he sees me... I mean where he sees all of me... like I've only ever dreamt.
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27th Aug 2022 6:32pm
