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Kissed
I am inside you
outside too
my arms are around you
we are who
are at the centre
right in the midst
of the love surrounding,
we are both kissed
by each other
lips and too tongue
warm sweet sensations
flow and they run
we're entwining
you are in me
we're face to face
in ecstasy
we're synchronizing
moving as one
body in motion
as we become
the love surrounding
where in the midst,
at the centre,
we are both kissed...
outside too
my arms are around you
we are who
are at the centre
right in the midst
of the love surrounding,
we are both kissed
by each other
lips and too tongue
warm sweet sensations
flow and they run
we're entwining
you are in me
we're face to face
in ecstasy
we're synchronizing
moving as one
body in motion
as we become
the love surrounding
where in the midst,
at the centre,
we are both kissed...
Published 24th Aug 2022
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24th Aug 2022 5:10am
I just realize you have been a member here for such a great length of time, and it truly amazes me, how you can put out such enchanting, beguiling, overwhelming, and inspiration, spoken word pieces, time after time. I can only imagine you have a vast poetic collection that needs the touch of your inspiring words to bring such beautiful imagery to life, I really like how your words, smoothly flow with this particular piece.
Good morning, my spoken word, poet and please enjoy the remainder of your day in peace and sweet serenity.
Good morning, my spoken word, poet and please enjoy the remainder of your day in peace and sweet serenity.
24th Aug 2022 5:57pm
Hoi hoi
I can only echo what
@SweetKittyCat5
Has offered you. Which in itself is great!
It almost reminds me of Joni Mitchell’s:
I’ve looked at at love from both sides now.
I think this is the essence of true love.
Or a true love poem to say the least.
Thanks for sharing!
Kind regards, Gus
I can only echo what
@SweetKittyCat5
Has offered you. Which in itself is great!
It almost reminds me of Joni Mitchell’s:
I’ve looked at at love from both sides now.
I think this is the essence of true love.
Or a true love poem to say the least.
Thanks for sharing!
Kind regards, Gus
29th Aug 2022 00:41am
To share that deep intimacy of sweet dreamy kisses or the thundering cadence and drive that passion requires in it's demand that can only be fulfilled with mouth exploring mouth— is pure divinity.
Ecstasy, indeed!
Wonderful ink, L
Enjoyed.
B
Ecstasy, indeed!
Wonderful ink, L
Enjoyed.
B
29th Aug 2022 1:01am
