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Your lips
Lovely in red but
hot when naked,
so velvety smooth
got me shaking.
Soft yet firm enough
to start a fire,
gifting kisses that
burn with desire.
Unrivaled power your
lips possess,
becoming warmer
with each caress.
Caustic upon my
skin when pressed,
creating a burn to
get undressed.
So damn pleasing
when wrapped around,
enjoying the motion
up and down.
Pleasure giving…
an understatement,
the more you give…
the more I take it.
I enjoy those lips that
smile and frown,
especially love them
going down.
hot when naked,
so velvety smooth
got me shaking.
Soft yet firm enough
to start a fire,
gifting kisses that
burn with desire.
Unrivaled power your
lips possess,
becoming warmer
with each caress.
Caustic upon my
skin when pressed,
creating a burn to
get undressed.
So damn pleasing
when wrapped around,
enjoying the motion
up and down.
Pleasure giving…
an understatement,
the more you give…
the more I take it.
I enjoy those lips that
smile and frown,
especially love them
going down.
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Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 2:39am
I have written many tender and engaging poetic musings in the engagement of a man's body part, and when I pen a woman-on-woman erotic, however, I have never captured the elements of the pleasure of lips as you have.. I can only say it must and it will always be a man's pleasure of his imagination.. nicely composed
So damn pleasing
when wrapped around,
enjoying the motion
up and down.
Oh, my that says is all for me.. totally mentally inviting!
So damn pleasing
when wrapped around,
enjoying the motion
up and down.
Oh, my that says is all for me.. totally mentally inviting!
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Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 3:11am
I find a it a hard decision to choose between a woman’s lips and her eyes when deciding
which is more sensual. To lose oneself in the heat of a stare …you know the one that just speaks to you/ losing yourself in the depths of that wordless conversation. Or the perfect kiss …so sensual …so perfect … the opening chapter ///sprinkled in between///then repeated afterwards.
I thank you for your kind words
truly appreciate the read.
Keith
which is more sensual. To lose oneself in the heat of a stare …you know the one that just speaks to you/ losing yourself in the depths of that wordless conversation. Or the perfect kiss …so sensual …so perfect … the opening chapter ///sprinkled in between///then repeated afterwards.
I thank you for your kind words
truly appreciate the read.
Keith
Re: Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 3:27am
He glazed upon the softness of my lips
And lost his will to surrender in my alluring hypnotic hazel eyes
Hum.. on that enticing notation, yes, I can see what you mean, my poet...
And lost his will to surrender in my alluring hypnotic hazel eyes
Hum.. on that enticing notation, yes, I can see what you mean, my poet...
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Re. Your lips
Is that in one of your poems I have yet to read ? If so point me in the right direction dear poetess
Re: Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 4:48am
No... those soft embracing words were for your eyes only... venerate in the beauty and enjoy your Sunday whispering on the horizon...
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Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 12:08pm
Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 12:08pm
Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 12:46pm
Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 1:17pm
I see the joy of lips to thighs
While looking in your lover's eyes
Great write!!
While looking in your lover's eyes
Great write!!
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Re. Your lips
14th Aug 2022 6:22pm
Thank you for taking the time to read
and thank you for the words of encouragement.
~NE~
and thank you for the words of encouragement.
~NE~
Re. Your lips
23rd Aug 2022 9:05pm
Naked lips are best, they feel everything.
Every fold as they press against you.
Every pulse as you feel them on you.
Velvety smooth, have you shaking...
This firm grasp I have on you.
Taking it all in, down the throat.
Feeling the power to make you come.
The power to keep edging so you don't.
This burn will never be forgotten.
Up and down, round and round.
Smile or frown you will feel everything.
And in that final moment nothing else matters.
You are mine...
Every fold as they press against you.
Every pulse as you feel them on you.
Velvety smooth, have you shaking...
This firm grasp I have on you.
Taking it all in, down the throat.
Feeling the power to make you come.
The power to keep edging so you don't.
This burn will never be forgotten.
Up and down, round and round.
Smile or frown you will feel everything.
And in that final moment nothing else matters.
You are mine...
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Re: Re. Your lips
24th Aug 2022 1:51am
I am
Thinking
I enjoy your
comments almost
as I enjoy reading your
poems because within them
is the same wonder comfort that
you have with your sexuality ….
Bold and unapologetic:)
Thinking
I enjoy your
comments almost
as I enjoy reading your
poems because within them
is the same wonder comfort that
you have with your sexuality ….
Bold and unapologetic:)