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Observing

Observing this young couple
In the métro
Mid-twenties
Each looking their own way
Each lost in their own thoughts
Wondering
Searching
Not daring to look at each other
What would there be to say
Nothing?
Trivialities?
So young
So bored with each other
Already.
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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