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Soft like Velvet
Just like flower petals you open up.
When life is feeling empty and
Extremely heavy you are the cup
That always remains full. You hand
Me parts of your soul and spirit
When mine is giving up. Your words
Bring hope. They are my one ticket
To the light in the darkness. Like birds
You fly me to a safer place. So my
Darling, I hope you never stop letting
The words float across the page die
Away. You are the soft and safe netting,
Protecting everyone. You are the ying
To my yang and the sweet to my sour.
You are like my miracle in the spring.
So I am thankful for you in every hour.
When life is feeling empty and
Extremely heavy you are the cup
That always remains full. You hand
Me parts of your soul and spirit
When mine is giving up. Your words
Bring hope. They are my one ticket
To the light in the darkness. Like birds
You fly me to a safer place. So my
Darling, I hope you never stop letting
The words float across the page die
Away. You are the soft and safe netting,
Protecting everyone. You are the ying
To my yang and the sweet to my sour.
You are like my miracle in the spring.
So I am thankful for you in every hour.
Published 6th Aug 2022
| Edited 19th Aug 2022
Author's Note
Written for Bluevelvete (thanks for the inspiration) and written for we came as gemini's competition.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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6th Aug 2022 11:38pm
Wow!!
What a surprisingly beautiful honor to come across today. I'm literally, deer in headlights, kind of shocked and extremely moved you've chosen me as inspiration. Me ---->🤯
This piece is so lovely and touching, I think I've lost my composure... lol.. ... ok ok..
I really adore how you incorporated my thoughts / messages, it speaks to me of your own kindness, keen awareness and genuine consideration.
I'm humbled, dear friend.
Really emotive and engaging.... your thoughts will remain and continue to have profound affect. I wish you all the best in life and good luck in the comp.
Much love and reverence,
🌹-💙
B
What a surprisingly beautiful honor to come across today. I'm literally, deer in headlights, kind of shocked and extremely moved you've chosen me as inspiration. Me ---->🤯
This piece is so lovely and touching, I think I've lost my composure... lol.. ... ok ok..
I really adore how you incorporated my thoughts / messages, it speaks to me of your own kindness, keen awareness and genuine consideration.
I'm humbled, dear friend.
Really emotive and engaging.... your thoughts will remain and continue to have profound affect. I wish you all the best in life and good luck in the comp.
Much love and reverence,
🌹-💙
B
7th Aug 2022 7:42am
I’m so glad you love it. Thanks for providing some inspiration. And you’ve really hit the nail on it’s head. I tried to echo some of your pieces. I really appreciate you and your kind words.
7th Aug 2022 1:02am
There is nothing more comforting than the feeling of being complete whether found within ourselves or completed by another.
Whether it be friendship or love it is an enduring gift.
Enjoyed the write.
~NE~
Whether it be friendship or love it is an enduring gift.
Enjoyed the write.
~NE~
7th Aug 2022 7:43am
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7th Aug 2022 2:36am
Great inspirational poem to Bluevelvete. You have a great muse and role model. Keep on writing.
7th Aug 2022 7:44am
19th Aug 2022 3:39pm
Wonderful work E. I always enjoy your unique structure and honest work.
Best of luck in the comp!
Best of luck in the comp!
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