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Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
I watch as he enters me at first slowly mesmerized by the size as his cock pushes into me. Suddenly I feel the wrath of his 'anger' at me as he grabs my hips and shoves in so deep and hard. And I let out a scream, it appears to have been the desired response since he looks quite satisfied with my reaction. He plunges deeper as I swing my head around, whipping my hair behind me and muttering 'oh God'. He is still grasping my hips, pushing and pulling as he moves in and out.
My small body absorbs the shock in these strong thrusts as I moan, such an exciting symphony to drive his lust. My legs pushed up against him giving him the ability to go even deeper, and he is going so deep. I just continue to moan, whimper, and try to breath chest heaving from the sensation. Like the fire has consumed all the oxygen.
"I am going to come" he says trying to pull away but I wrap my legs around him and hold him there feeling that final jerk of his cock inside of me. Anticipating that hot thick flood of cum. "Please" I say in response but he is still pushing me but my legs are strong and hold steady as I pull myself closer. My hips moving him inside, rubbing him and I can see he is right at the moment of climax. He says something incoherent and then I feel his cock start to unload as he lets out a growl. I shut my eyes, feeling the full effect rippling through me. His contractions continue as he shoots his load more and more... My excitement grows with each as I start to orgasm washing his jizz all around inside of me.
I shake and shudder causing his cock to rub my tense walls even more. And although the assault of his fluids had stopped I can feel it start again, as another load dumps inside of me. I really rock my hips aggressively so it doesn't stop as my orgasm continues to shake every part of my body and mind. He slams into me with one final stream that is already finding it's way out of me around his cock. He pulls out and looks at me shaking moaning, the intensity of my orgasm increased so much from feeling him pour out. He grabs my legs pulling them apart and then my lips as cum just streams out like it will never end. "What the fuck is wrong with you" he says sternly as I finger my clit still feeling the last wave of my orgasm as everything spills out of me.
But I manage to sit up, his cock is starting to sink but I take it in my mouth and give it a thorough cleaning. He is very annoyed that I made him shoot his load inside me. I suppose that is why he was draining it out of me. He puts back on pants and I grab my panties and shorts. "You really are a great physical trainer" I whisper. "I want you to take me from behind next time, teach me". "Take a shower and make sure you clean inside really good" he says, pretending to ignore what I said. But there is no doubt in my mind he will respond to my call every time. And there are so many more workouts he wants to have with me. I can still feel him inside me. He will be there again, I know that.
My small body absorbs the shock in these strong thrusts as I moan, such an exciting symphony to drive his lust. My legs pushed up against him giving him the ability to go even deeper, and he is going so deep. I just continue to moan, whimper, and try to breath chest heaving from the sensation. Like the fire has consumed all the oxygen.
"I am going to come" he says trying to pull away but I wrap my legs around him and hold him there feeling that final jerk of his cock inside of me. Anticipating that hot thick flood of cum. "Please" I say in response but he is still pushing me but my legs are strong and hold steady as I pull myself closer. My hips moving him inside, rubbing him and I can see he is right at the moment of climax. He says something incoherent and then I feel his cock start to unload as he lets out a growl. I shut my eyes, feeling the full effect rippling through me. His contractions continue as he shoots his load more and more... My excitement grows with each as I start to orgasm washing his jizz all around inside of me.
I shake and shudder causing his cock to rub my tense walls even more. And although the assault of his fluids had stopped I can feel it start again, as another load dumps inside of me. I really rock my hips aggressively so it doesn't stop as my orgasm continues to shake every part of my body and mind. He slams into me with one final stream that is already finding it's way out of me around his cock. He pulls out and looks at me shaking moaning, the intensity of my orgasm increased so much from feeling him pour out. He grabs my legs pulling them apart and then my lips as cum just streams out like it will never end. "What the fuck is wrong with you" he says sternly as I finger my clit still feeling the last wave of my orgasm as everything spills out of me.
But I manage to sit up, his cock is starting to sink but I take it in my mouth and give it a thorough cleaning. He is very annoyed that I made him shoot his load inside me. I suppose that is why he was draining it out of me. He puts back on pants and I grab my panties and shorts. "You really are a great physical trainer" I whisper. "I want you to take me from behind next time, teach me". "Take a shower and make sure you clean inside really good" he says, pretending to ignore what I said. But there is no doubt in my mind he will respond to my call every time. And there are so many more workouts he wants to have with me. I can still feel him inside me. He will be there again, I know that.
Author's Note
Okay some wanted a final part so here it is because I aim to please. Sorry for the delay, hopefully it is worthy of your time. It's definitely better to read in order if you haven't. Thanks to all those who followed along with me and shared your thoughts. That really helped so much in regards to knowing if this was something people would like and if to continue posting it/others. <3 Same as before, written very fast without editing so if you do see a mistake or have a suggestion feel free to share it with me in PM or otherwise. Thanks. (guessing I should have proof read it now before posting... but oh well... not the first time)
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
8th Aug 2022 00:19am
Hey T, I am glad to see you back again, so I am going to move this reply to here now. ;) I am so happy you thought it was explosive and a worthy finale. I always want to satiate the needs as best as words can. And I take exhausted hands as the greatest compliment that can be given. Because creating pleasure is what I live for. Thanks so much for following along with me and continue to share your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 00:17am
I'll miss these workouts.
Working the right kind of muscles pays dividends.
Kind of like a growth stock though, buy low make new highs.
That's Xina
BIG CREAM OF THE CROP LIKE
Working the right kind of muscles pays dividends.
Kind of like a growth stock though, buy low make new highs.
That's Xina
BIG CREAM OF THE CROP LIKE
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 9:16pm
The workouts will always continue. Perhaps in different ways but they will continue rest assured of that. Unless I leave I guess but that's a different matter. I love the build up that creates the most impressive explosion in me, in my mouth, on my body, in... well you get the point. I love taking people to new highs, taking me to new highs. Pushing the limits way beyond anything that is acceptable. Lots of cream, not in my coffee but in me... I take my coffee with no cream or sugar... because I am extreme like that in everything. lol Thanks so much for joining me in this workout and sharing with me. I really appreciate it so much.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 00:21am
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 9:17pm
Mega gorgeous, well damn I am loving the sound of that Ron. And of course absolutely awesome. I think you are absolutely awesome and I love how you always spread the love and light in everything you do. Thank you so much for supporting through this journey in the gym and this workout. It really means a lot to me that you are here. I appreciate it so much.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 3:57am
I could drink a case of your writing my darling. This is pure white hot sensuality at its best. The attention to detail and the focus on physicality make for a wildly wonderful ride. I could feel myself as him with you and all the wonderful sensations as the inevitable climax rose into a mighty force undeniable and a force of nature. This is erotica at its best uninhibited and deeply felt. You really created something altogether beautiful here. I am mesmerized.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
Well a case is definitely going to get you wasted out of your mind. You will definitely do a hell of a lot of things you would not do otherwise. :p Definitely a super great and fun ride. ;) Actually this is definitely the easiest write for me, it writes itself. Well you know what I mean. It's just stream of consciousness straight to paper. That you could feel yourself in this is the greatest compliment. I have always been told I project my emotions and feelings very strongly. That I can make an entire room sad or happy or... Since I feel others feelings very strongly, I guess I project mine strongly as well. And that certainly translates to passion in every way. That is how I get away from feeling all the other stuff. Uninhibited and deeply felt being my normal mode in such things. That you think it is beautiful and are mesmerized means so much to me. Thanks for taking this journey through the 'tame' part of my mind. ;) I love that.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 5:11am
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 11:47pm
I am always stimulating... ;) It's what I love doing the most. Knowing that you enjoyed taking this journey into my mind with me means so much to me. Thanks you so much for continuing to read and share your thoughts. I really love that. I certainly want to bring you more in the future and I hope I can continue doing that.
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
5th Aug 2022 00:03am
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
Can't get people all built up and not have a climax hehe 😁 I love the part where he comes right after cumming. It does happen though it does take me a minute or so to get it there again. Also makes me sore, but yeah lol.
Wonderful finale, friend. Was great reading this sexy story.
Wonderful finale, friend. Was great reading this sexy story.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 11:50pm
Haha, yeah I just couldn't do that. I am a pleaser and that would just haunt me. And you know how that goes, when someone can get that second wave out of you... Not letting you finish. Never letting go... needing more as you eagerly try to supply it. There is more to come, oh yes... there is definitely more in there and only certain people can get to that. I make it a mission to get it all. You would be sore - you can rest assured of that and I would be too. But I love being sore after a workout. It means so much happened. Thanks so much for following along with me DC. I love that.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
4th Aug 2022 9:15pm
To the first comment - I am guessing that's you T. ;) But you de-activated before I could respond to your wonderful comment. Anyway I will just comment at this level since that is all I can do right now. I am so happy you thought it was explosive and a worthy finale. I always want to satiate the needs as best as words can. And I take exhausted hands as the greatest compliment that can be given. Because creating pleasure is what I live for. Thanks so much for following along with me and continue to share your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
7th Aug 2022 2:28am
Wow very hot and steamy visuals... what a great way to spice up a workout hehe... great ink xinaskirt
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
8th Aug 2022 00:17am
Well hey there MV, I am happy you made it over to this side of my writing. ;) I love creating very hot and steamy visuals... I am full of those. And I love to spice up a workout but any workout that involves sex is good for me. This one is definitely best read from the beginning if you missed the other parts. I think you can appreciate it more that way. God knows I was super horny writing it. :p But I have written other things as well I suppose I will decide on posting. Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I really appreciate that so much.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 4:44am
X-skirt
This was enjoyable and full of fun.
It still leaves me with a moral dilemma though.
This was enjoyable and full of fun.
It still leaves me with a moral dilemma though.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 2:50pm
Well let's stick with enjoyable and full of fun first. ;) Because I love enjoyable and fun. And I certainly want you to feel that. Thanks for following through this whole journey with me and leaving me such wonderful thoughts. I really appreciate that so much.
Uh oh! What's the moral dilemma? :p
Uh oh! What's the moral dilemma? :p
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 4:15pm
The girl is not quite of legal age yet, is she?
But that would not have been a consideration when writing this since the creative process is open to everything.
But that would not have been a consideration when writing this since the creative process is open to everything.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 5:37pm
Yes the creative process is open to everything. Obviously people's experience with certain things happens at many different ages. I think specifying an age is unnecessary. Each person can make that determination on their own based on their experiences and such.
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 5:41pm
On that note, what would be the average age of a high school girl who is a Little gym rat?
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 5:42pm
I will definitely leave that up to reader... I get into enough trouble all by myself. lol
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 5:45pm
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 5:48pm
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
18th Aug 2022 5:54pm
There's a quote that was said in a movie by a prisoner which was: "Of all the people in this prison I'm the only one who is guilty"
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Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
27th Aug 2022 2:49pm
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
28th Aug 2022 2:45pm
Always a good little gym slut. The best workout a guy can have. ;)
Oh yes! class is definitely about learning about girls and that can be moving target. lol
So there is never an end point... you just have to keep learning...
There can definitely be some tough lessons in there...
But it's a wild ride and what could be more satisfying?
Even if it's going to make you crazy. lol
Oh yes! class is definitely about learning about girls and that can be moving target. lol
So there is never an end point... you just have to keep learning...
There can definitely be some tough lessons in there...
But it's a wild ride and what could be more satisfying?
Even if it's going to make you crazy. lol
Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
You get your exercise and then you more experience for your horny sexy body. Let the lioness roar out. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 8 - I am going to cum now
5th Apr 2024 9:16pm
Oh boy! it's been so long since I posted this one that I need to go back and read it again. But I was inspired... I know when I go to the gym there is always something to get excited about. :p