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Succumbing to Desire
He never said please
nor thank you afterwards
but she sure did please
without ever batting an eye
and she had him
when he looked at her
succumbing to the secrets inside
he went inside
deeply
searching for feeling
or an oubliette to hide
nor thank you afterwards
but she sure did please
without ever batting an eye
and she had him
when he looked at her
succumbing to the secrets inside
he went inside
deeply
searching for feeling
or an oubliette to hide
Published 2nd Aug 2022
| Edited 3rd Aug 2022
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3rd Aug 2022 2:13pm
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10th Aug 2022 9:17pm
Absolutely awesome Tim. When you are with a 'pleaser' and you go inside deeply you are going to feel everything deeply. You can be assured... because you feeling everything deeply in her gives her the most satisfaction and she will feel intensely too. 'or an oubliette to hide' what an incredible line. I absolutely love the imagery I got from this. There is no better place to hide. ;)
11th Aug 2022 12:49pm
