Now or now

Like adding a little salt to recipe, so it balances out the sweetness... (is how adding those words, sort of feel to me!)  
 
I adore the way your lyrics seem to build and build and how you create and set a scene within my mind's eye... some lovely imagery and the ending leaves the ache of 'want' echoing.... which I absolutely loved.  
 
Great work, dear Marks  
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏  
🌹 💙  
B

Thank you very much, Bluevelvete.

So often it is unexpected but always seductive isn't it? It always feels like too long somehow, it always feel like now or never. But love is always calling... and it is what keeps us young. Those intense feelings of love and passion that keeps us feeling everything. And those hormones are the fountain of youth. I love the rhythm of this Marks. It's really great!

Thank you for your comment, KristinaX.
Thank you for adding these songlyrics to your  Reading List.

Thank you for your comment, bcharmed (Brandy B).

"I'm a river
She's the ocean"
^^^^
if these aren't the
most romantic {or sexiest}
lines I've read then I'll be damned.
they just reached out
& grabbed me by the throat.
... since you have indicated that you
prefer honest critique,
i'll add my 2 cents;
the use of demagogue & populist
is a tad jarring,
the words feel like an afterthought
rather than a necessity
buuuuut that's just my opinion
feel free to tell me to get stuffed XD

♡ yiyi

Thank you for your comment.

You made me feel like a butterfly flying through a field of tulips... She is ... ... unavoidable desire to fly!

PAR

Thank you for your comment, PAR.

Love the phrase now is now. I only believe in the now.
Beautiful poem.

Thank you, deliabear (Debbie).

Such divine rhetoric. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent. Hugs and peace, Oral

Thank you very much, TheOralizer.

This reads like it would make a good performance piece. It has a good pace to it.

Thank you for your comment, Casted_Runes.

Very interesting reading. Keep up the good work.

Thank you, CasketSharpe.

The call of Love though unexpected we answer and embrace.. we turn young in heart.. life flows in veins.. music enchants the soul.. time loses its weight and we just fly on the wings of love with no delay.. I so much enjoyed reading your poetry! Stay blessed with love.

Thank you very much for your comment, MySmile(Besma).

Love usually comes when you least expect it.

I love this piece, the questions in it and yet the title is Now or now. So very clever.

I'm a river
She's the ocean > such beautiful lines and so romantic.

Thank you for your comment.
Thank you for adding these songlyrics to your Reading List.

"Now or Now" songlyrics are very simple.
I suggest your reading the following songlyrics I wrote :  

*I wonder how*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/426445-i-wonder-how/

*Chorusless Song*  (covid19 pandemic days)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/390859-chorusless-song/

*Perpetual Check*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/350748-perpetual-check/

*Charade*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/316645-charade/

*Far Between*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/277828-far-between/

*Invertebrate*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/271753-invertebrate/

... ... ... ...

Aah... beautiful lyrics....it keeps playing in the mind...love it 😍

Thank you for your comment, InDreamz.
Thank you for adding it to your *reading list*.
... ... ... ...

My pleasure 😊

... 👍

"Now or Now" songlyrics are very simple.

I suggest your reading the following songlyrics I wrote :  

*I wonder how*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/426445-i-wonder-how/

*Chorusless Song*  (covid19 pandemic days)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/390859-chorusless-song/

*Perpetual Check*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/350748-perpetual-check/

*Charade*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/316645-charade/

*Far Between*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/277828-far-between/

*Invertebrate*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/271753-invertebrate/

... ... ... ... ...

Always a choice, now or never. But one option is so unfathomable as to render one's choice non-existent. I, too, vote for "Now"

Thank you for your comment, FATBOY300PLUS.

you've got some lovely responses but those
ellipses at the bottom of your work look like
there might be more words just out of sight
(to my eyesight, that is) they make me itch
to pull them up and into sight. It's like they've
slipped through some crack in the electronic
page.

Thank you for your comment, Rew.
There are not anymore words out of sight.
(What do you mean by ellipses?)

First up

" An ellipsis, or ellipses in the plural form, is a punctuation mark of three dots (. . .) that shows an omission of words, represents a pause, or suggests there’s something left unsaid. The ellipsis is a favorite tool of writers because it can symbolize silence in text, but it’s also used more practically to show that a direct quote has been altered. "

There, that's the full thing on ellipses...

Now to what they ( ellipses) look like to me on a white electronic page with my eyesight is - the top of letters disappearing into the electronic page!

Though having said that it would take an herculean effort of someone's imagination to be able to visualize that. I do it all the time.

OK, OK, Rew.
It only just *represents  a pause*.
(No dots this time ) 😀😉  

We always need to answer the call of Love! Life sustaining and the core of all that is beautiful! So much enjoyed reading you! God bless you.

Thank you for your comment, MySmile (Besma)