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Spot
I went to our spot
A few days ago
I call it our spot
You probably don't
I saw all the ships
I saw all the lights
I went to our spot
And there I cried
And there I lost
My freedom, my joy
Forever taken
By a stupid stupid boy
A few days ago
I call it our spot
You probably don't
I saw all the ships
I saw all the lights
I went to our spot
And there I cried
And there I lost
My freedom, my joy
Forever taken
By a stupid stupid boy
Published 31st Jul 2022
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1st Aug 2022 1:59am
Good write! Reminds me of Sara Teasdale. Who is one of my favs.
This is simple yet strong. It doesn't need a bunch of build up. It stands well as it is.
Great job.
This is simple yet strong. It doesn't need a bunch of build up. It stands well as it is.
Great job.
1st Aug 2022 5:29pm
