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HE PLACED IT WHERE
He placed his manhood where,
framed by her pubic hair,
he found comfy landing
for its stiff upstanding.
Her wet and silky walls,
warmer than barons' halls,
wrapped themselves around his
back-forth thrusting penis..
The rolling of her hips
in response to the dips
when he bore into her
wet squelching vagina.
Their one on one rhythm
soon released his jism,
the reflex sensation
brought ejaculation.
It spurred her own cumming,
Left breathless, heart drumming,
her mind floated away
up Seventh Heaven way.
Winding down, lying lax,
his kisses made fresh tracks,
tasting the cooling sweat
their action did beget.
Then taking loving sips
from her filled lower lips,
drinking the mixed potion
wrought in that devotion.
framed by her pubic hair,
he found comfy landing
for its stiff upstanding.
Her wet and silky walls,
warmer than barons' halls,
wrapped themselves around his
back-forth thrusting penis..
The rolling of her hips
in response to the dips
when he bore into her
wet squelching vagina.
Their one on one rhythm
soon released his jism,
the reflex sensation
brought ejaculation.
It spurred her own cumming,
Left breathless, heart drumming,
her mind floated away
up Seventh Heaven way.
Winding down, lying lax,
his kisses made fresh tracks,
tasting the cooling sweat
their action did beget.
Then taking loving sips
from her filled lower lips,
drinking the mixed potion
wrought in that devotion.
Published 23rd Jul 2022
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23rd Jul 2022 9:19am
24th Jul 2022 4:45pm
I can honestly say tracking the rhyme scheme became my number one priority.
That last stanza really worked for me:
“Then taking loving sips
from her filled lower lips,
drinking the mixed potion
wrought in that devotion.”
That last stanza really worked for me:
“Then taking loving sips
from her filled lower lips,
drinking the mixed potion
wrought in that devotion.”
26th Jul 2022 6:27am
2nd Aug 2022 7:21pm
Oh yes, that moment when you feel things start to pour inside and that excitement brings on your orgasm as well. Cumming together is so beautiful. Feeling that intense sensation together. Really love this SS.
