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the quiet thorn on a rose
love doesn't set
someone up to
fail
love doesn't
rescue someone
from failing
love knows
when to
speak
love knows
when to keep
silent
as the wings of
days fly past us
and leaves behind
flowers that
never took
root
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18th Jul 2022 9:48pm
Re. the quiet thorn on a rose
Dear BK,
I wish I’d had the wisdom of stanza four years ago! I think you portray love as it’s meant to be in this write. Unconditional and without strings. I like that. H🌷
I wish I’d had the wisdom of stanza four years ago! I think you portray love as it’s meant to be in this write. Unconditional and without strings. I like that. H🌷
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I do not know if we can reach that lofty air of unconditional love, Honoria. I would settle for genuine.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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