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When Darkness Whispers
The darkness whispered to me
"I'll tell you a secret if you dare."
"I dare," I replied back
"There are times."
Growling softly
"You are too much trouble."
"And I wish you would die."
Snarling in disgust
"That's no secret to me."
I whispered back.
"I'll tell you a secret if you dare."
"I dare," I replied back
"There are times."
Growling softly
"You are too much trouble."
"And I wish you would die."
Snarling in disgust
"That's no secret to me."
I whispered back.
Published 11th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Just a little poem that acknowledges the darkness inside.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Jul 2022 10:44pm
11th Jul 2022 10:49pm
Thank you so much for your kindness as well as your time. I only hope someday I become close to your level of poetry.
xoxo
xoxo
11th Jul 2022 11:43pm
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12th Jul 2022 12:46pm
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12th Jul 2022 6:00pm
I think this is excellent, and know that many of us can identify. Great start.
12th Jul 2022 6:01pm
12th Jul 2022 6:14pm
Hoi hoi
I love it, when people use small words for big poems.
You’re an artiste my dear, I kiss the ground you walk upon.
All that and welcome too!
Kind regards, Gus
I love it, when people use small words for big poems.
You’re an artiste my dear, I kiss the ground you walk upon.
All that and welcome too!
Kind regards, Gus
