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Mile by Mile
Only the stars know my scars
painful memories that are ours
we hide them with a smile
burdens carried mile after mile
unbent before God's trials
the stars to witness this holy mess
with our burdens we are truly blessed
finding faith in God's caress
painful memories that are ours
we hide them with a smile
burdens carried mile after mile
unbent before God's trials
the stars to witness this holy mess
with our burdens we are truly blessed
finding faith in God's caress
Published 10th Jul 2022
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15th Jul 2022 9:14pm
You make some interesting points about suffering. It can shape us, for better or worse... we should try to find the good in the situation. It can also allow others to come alongside us and share the journey, grow our faith and grow as humans. This is spiritual and soothing.
15th Jul 2022 9:22pm
Good morning, I don't think we've met.. so how do you do, I'm very glad to meet you.
I'm obviously very pleased you found value in this, life is never easy but I find hope is eternal and maybe the most powerful force on earth.
I'm obviously very pleased you found value in this, life is never easy but I find hope is eternal and maybe the most powerful force on earth.
15th Jul 2022 9:24pm
All good, thanks. We haven't met, so hi! I've read a few of your pieces before, and will read more now. Yes, there is ALWAYS hope... in fact, I've started a competition thread about it.
