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Senryu - Save Your Self
Quit self destruction
cleave to what brings profound joy
write dear poet, write
cleave to what brings profound joy
write dear poet, write
Published 10th Jul 2022
Author's Note
What keeps one from doing what brings sure, wholehearted happiness...why oneself, of course.
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10th Jul 2022 5:36am
Dear GW,
Your authors note is as poetic as your poem. I loved the message of this piece. So much directly said with an economy of words that are so effective and powerful.
I think I really needed to read this tonight. I thank you for this timeliness. It’s so great to see you! Excellent write. H🌷
Your authors note is as poetic as your poem. I loved the message of this piece. So much directly said with an economy of words that are so effective and powerful.
I think I really needed to read this tonight. I thank you for this timeliness. It’s so great to see you! Excellent write. H🌷
10th Jul 2022 9:38pm
Dearest, Honoriaa
That you enjoy this poem is a joy to me that is doubled by this beautiful passage in your comen, "I really needed to read this tonight.."
That you enjoy this poem is a joy to me that is doubled by this beautiful passage in your comen, "I really needed to read this tonight.."
Anonymous
10th Jul 2022 6:23am
I have, I am, I will.
First and foremost
The words blossom for me
While everyone deciphers
The here and the now
and in-between the lines
by that time
I'll be long
gone.
Hi GW, hope you're doing well.
As always, I love your positive energy in this poem.
First and foremost
The words blossom for me
While everyone deciphers
The here and the now
and in-between the lines
by that time
I'll be long
gone.
Hi GW, hope you're doing well.
As always, I love your positive energy in this poem.
10th Jul 2022 9:34pm
Dearest, Rina
I am positively over the Moon to read your name and see your face again. You are one of the DUP poets that has taught me so much about the craft. I've missed your words vey much. Are you gonna stick around a spell?
I am sent on an additional lunar orrbit reading your comment...I am so pleased that you enjoy this piece.
I am positively over the Moon to read your name and see your face again. You are one of the DUP poets that has taught me so much about the craft. I've missed your words vey much. Are you gonna stick around a spell?
I am sent on an additional lunar orrbit reading your comment...I am so pleased that you enjoy this piece.
Anonymous
12th Jul 2022 3:27pm
Thank you, it means a lot coming from someone like you who has not only been a great friend on here but also a multi talented peer.
I will stick around as much as I can but I must admit I don't have the interest in any social media sites as before even if it involves poetry. But as long as my account on here is active I may drop by when I can.
keep up the good work..hugz
I will stick around as much as I can but I must admit I don't have the interest in any social media sites as before even if it involves poetry. But as long as my account on here is active I may drop by when I can.
keep up the good work..hugz
10th Jul 2022 10:38pm
Your words are like beacons, Dear BB
Yes, we're oftentimes our own worst saboteurs!
You so aptly and beautifully pen such a reverberating and wholly resonant 17 syllables.
I'm so glad, to see you and I'm so sorry I passed this senryú by without expressing my thanks for the immensely pleasurable read.
Hope you are well.
Miss you...
🌹 - 💙
🐻💋🐰
x
Yes, we're oftentimes our own worst saboteurs!
You so aptly and beautifully pen such a reverberating and wholly resonant 17 syllables.
I'm so glad, to see you and I'm so sorry I passed this senryú by without expressing my thanks for the immensely pleasurable read.
Hope you are well.
Miss you...
🌹 - 💙
🐻💋🐰
x
11th Jul 2022 00:06am
Thank you so much, Lady Blue <3<3 (haven't figured out emojis on my new Chrome build)
I am alway thrilled when you leave your thoughts,,,i treasure them. I am sorry I have not reda many of yours of late. This poem is my epiphany that I need to retturn to my passion.
I am alway thrilled when you leave your thoughts,,,i treasure them. I am sorry I have not reda many of yours of late. This poem is my epiphany that I need to retturn to my passion.
