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Not Just Passion
If your love was a pool,
I would drown in the deep.
If your love was a mountain,
I'd climb to freeze at the peak.
But your love is a fire, so I say,
"Burn me alive."
I would drown in the deep.
If your love was a mountain,
I'd climb to freeze at the peak.
But your love is a fire, so I say,
"Burn me alive."
Published 21st Mar 2012
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24th Mar 2012 3:02pm
This poem has a definite spiritual feeling ...
As one great Saint said about a moth, "It is so in love with light that it will burn itself up in the flame of a candle." My best wishes go out to you. Bruce
As one great Saint said about a moth, "It is so in love with light that it will burn itself up in the flame of a candle." My best wishes go out to you. Bruce
actually that was the inspiration behind the poem. I deeply believe that how we love others is inspired by the love relationship we
can have with God.
can have with God.
