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Bitch
All the complaining
That I have done
In the past
Cannot hold a candle
To the bitching
I plan on doing
From here on in
That I have done
In the past
Cannot hold a candle
To the bitching
I plan on doing
From here on in
Published 4th Jul 2022
Author's Note
I only added a theme because I had to. It seems a silly thing to me. Bitch, bitch, bitch.
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4th Jul 2022 3:05am
Good goddamn, girl, YAS, let it FLY!
The in-your-face factual statement that there will not be anymore tolerance. That's good shit.
Even better, that you're not going to hold back. There's an unspoken "hold back for other people's comfort" in there, because you change from "complain" which is a little more PC and genteel, to "bitching" which is .
Also, the themes are super lame. I found this to be motivational.
Great post!
The in-your-face factual statement that there will not be anymore tolerance. That's good shit.
Even better, that you're not going to hold back. There's an unspoken "hold back for other people's comfort" in there, because you change from "complain" which is a little more PC and genteel, to "bitching" which is .
Also, the themes are super lame. I found this to be motivational.
Great post!
4th Jul 2022 9:24am
Dear TL,
This sounds like a very fine idea! The more years I acquire I feel allow me more rights to bitch. I really enjoyed your poem. Perfect length, great flow, wonderful topic. H🌷
This sounds like a very fine idea! The more years I acquire I feel allow me more rights to bitch. I really enjoyed your poem. Perfect length, great flow, wonderful topic. H🌷
