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MINE
i
When I touched her skin
The touch was not like before
It was something new
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I knew she felt it
The aura was not the same
It’s warmth filled my soul
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Slowly giving in
As I laid claim to her skin
Whispering softly
iv
Seducing her mind
Breaths beating against her skin
She belongs to me
v
Never below me
She stands proudly at my side
My beautiful queen
When I touched her skin
The touch was not like before
It was something new
ii
I knew she felt it
The aura was not the same
It’s warmth filled my soul
iii
Slowly giving in
As I laid claim to her skin
Whispering softly
iv
Seducing her mind
Breaths beating against her skin
She belongs to me
v
Never below me
She stands proudly at my side
My beautiful queen
Published 26th Jun 2022
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26th Jun 2022 12:49pm
Hey there, Swagger
I adore senryú, it's some of my favorite styles of poetry and your pen really captures something so beautifully personal and intimate. The reverence that we as a reader feel emanating from you, The Author towards your submissive, is deeply moving and a testament to your care as a Dom and good character in general.
Love the visual... whew!
Outstanding senryú compilation.
Thank you for putting it out there for us 🙏
🌹-💙
B
I adore senryú, it's some of my favorite styles of poetry and your pen really captures something so beautifully personal and intimate. The reverence that we as a reader feel emanating from you, The Author towards your submissive, is deeply moving and a testament to your care as a Dom and good character in general.
Love the visual... whew!
Outstanding senryú compilation.
Thank you for putting it out there for us 🙏
🌹-💙
B
27th Jun 2022 9:00am
Thank you for your kind words blue. I am glad you enjoyed this little piece. 🖤
26th Jun 2022 1:17pm
27th Jun 2022 9:01am
7th Nov 2022 1:27am
Perfect title and picture Wh1skey.
The appreciation, respect, and adoration you have shown in your words is truly beautiful and heart warming. She definitely felt it, just like your readers do. ;) I know I did. I absolutely love how perfectly you composed and put these together to make this compilation with such a seamless message that just flows so wonderfully. Here is my completely impatient and not worthy attempt at writing something back. :p Perhaps when I have more time I will do something better.
i
when he touched my skin
like nothing I felt before
it was something new
ii
and he felt it too
with such an intensity
this need to fill me
iii
slowly giving in
as he laid claim to my skin
kissing me softly
iv
Seducing my mind
Penetrating into me
I belong to him
v
caressing me tight
lifting me up beside him
my powerful king
The appreciation, respect, and adoration you have shown in your words is truly beautiful and heart warming. She definitely felt it, just like your readers do. ;) I know I did. I absolutely love how perfectly you composed and put these together to make this compilation with such a seamless message that just flows so wonderfully. Here is my completely impatient and not worthy attempt at writing something back. :p Perhaps when I have more time I will do something better.
i
when he touched my skin
like nothing I felt before
it was something new
ii
and he felt it too
with such an intensity
this need to fill me
iii
slowly giving in
as he laid claim to my skin
kissing me softly
iv
Seducing my mind
Penetrating into me
I belong to him
v
caressing me tight
lifting me up beside him
my powerful king
7th Nov 2022 1:46pm
Kristina I would say thank you for taking the time to read me, but this, this is beautiful. You definitely caught me off guard, and I freaking love it. Thank you for feeding off my words 🖤🖤🖤
7th Nov 2022 5:53pm
Ha, I love catching you off guard. And even more so that you freaking love it. ;)
7th Nov 2022 2:10am
7th Nov 2022 1:53pm
….. into the unknown, you may be surprised what you learn about yourself 🖤
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24th May 2024 4:42am
' Breaths beating against skin, slowly giving in. '
Oh, those whispered words, they create a breathtaking mood within.
Oh, those whispered words, they create a breathtaking mood within.
24th May 2024 4:49am
Yes. Like a soft melody dancing 'pon the skin. Whispers create chills . . that rise and fall.
❤️
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