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23rd Jun 2022 2:20pm
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23rd Jun 2022 11:48pm
Dear BK,
I see this first as an awesome poem and second in addition to a positive love also one that’s not so positive. It’s the noose of love that chokes the life out of you because it’s toxic. Very clever write! H🌷
I see this first as an awesome poem and second in addition to a positive love also one that’s not so positive. It’s the noose of love that chokes the life out of you because it’s toxic. Very clever write! H🌷
23rd Jun 2022 11:45pm
Ahh. That's my clever girl! Well done.
Thank you, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
30th Jul 2022 11:54pm
Reading the title I thought this would have a double meaning. Reading the poem one can feel the weight and anxiety.
Great spill
Great spill
31st Jul 2022 4:10pm
8th Aug 2022 8:48pm
Left me hanging or at least dangling
Like a participle
Up with which I will not put.
Like a participle
Up with which I will not put.
