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Uncertainty
When your pen
left behind lines
scribing the horizon
I knew
--- I used to
your thoughts
were finding a way
to carry me
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Re. Uncertainty
14th Jun 2022 10:51pm
hello dearest poet I feel sad today
love hurts but it's beautiful in its pain
I don't know...
this is a very feeling write
one that moved me....
love hurts but it's beautiful in its pain
I don't know...
this is a very feeling write
one that moved me....
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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 1:13am
Love does hurt, but we couldn't have it without the pain, could we? What's a high without a low? It is a beautiful thing, I agree. I am sorry that you feel sad today, though. I hope the sadness passes soon.
Thank you for taking the time to share and let me know this moved you. The r/l add is very much appreciated as well.
Thank you for taking the time to share and let me know this moved you. The r/l add is very much appreciated as well.
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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 1:21am
Words are indeed powerful, particularly when that's all there may be left. They can haunt or comfort, and a myriad of other things. Thank you for seeing that sort of depth in this piece, and feeling it worthy of your reading list.
Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 1:24am
Thanks for stopping by and letting me know you found it relatable. Much appreciated.
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15th Jun 2022 3:18am
Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 4:38am
Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 4:53am
Thanks for the compliment and reading list add. Appreciate you taking the time to stop by :-)
Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 5:41am
Dear PS,
Some poems have fingers that just grab at the heart strings. This was one of them. Reading this through several times netted the same reaction- a catch in my breath. Very touching and lovely piece. H🌷
Some poems have fingers that just grab at the heart strings. This was one of them. Reading this through several times netted the same reaction- a catch in my breath. Very touching and lovely piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 8:54am
Oh, thank you... that's a very high compliment, and it means a lot to me. Appreciate the reading list add, as well. :-)