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Immortality
We have made contact
With the clouds
Contact with the
Lifting
Shifting veils
That
Reveal
Spectacular panoramas
Pressed into
Perceptions in pristine
Sistine visions
Held
&
Upheld
Across the ordeals
Of
Existence
Shining through all travails
Perpetually
Having the capacity
&
The audacity
To bring down
The
Procession
In a nuclear vision
Published 10th Jun 2022
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10th Jun 2022 7:35pm
11th Jun 2022 9:20am
10th Jun 2022 7:48pm
11th Jun 2022 9:22am
I did say, somewhere, that Poetry
has become a contact sport... :p
Thank you LDF...
That is a very awesome thing to say.
has become a contact sport... :p
Thank you LDF...
That is a very awesome thing to say.
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11th Jun 2022 9:23am
Beautiful comment R...
"The sky must have told you their tales."
Wonderful.
Thank you so much!
"The sky must have told you their tales."
Wonderful.
Thank you so much!
10th Jun 2022 8:38pm
You're a word painter with these pinpoint accurate little bursts of poetic color that explode into such poignant and impressive thought progressions...To me, it's artillery of words that ricochet out this abundant mount of possibility.... I absolutely love that.
I look forward to reading the accompanying 'mortality' poem, too.
Killer read, Cipher
🌹 - 💣
I look forward to reading the accompanying 'mortality' poem, too.
Killer read, Cipher
🌹 - 💣
11th Jun 2022 9:26am
Totally cool, B...
Stylistic approach is something...
Something that I ponder...
I ponder as I watch the organic unfolding...
Like a partnership with nature...
Reaching across the veil and making the deal...
I feel like such a thing occurs
alongside one's personal evolution...
Which is such a deep interaction with the universe...
I am so happy that you appreciate these things...
Such an appreciate is also...
A deep interaction with the universe...
And something I engage in whilst
interacting with your work...
I am deeply grateful for the energies
which you share with me...
Stylistic approach is something...
Something that I ponder...
I ponder as I watch the organic unfolding...
Like a partnership with nature...
Reaching across the veil and making the deal...
I feel like such a thing occurs
alongside one's personal evolution...
Which is such a deep interaction with the universe...
I am so happy that you appreciate these things...
Such an appreciate is also...
A deep interaction with the universe...
And something I engage in whilst
interacting with your work...
I am deeply grateful for the energies
which you share with me...
12th Jun 2022 2:18am
Wow that was poetry in motion C :)
I adore you and Blues connection,
makes me happy to see the mutual respect and caring, 😘 indeed you two have a cosmic connection ♥️
I adore you and Blues connection,
makes me happy to see the mutual respect and caring, 😘 indeed you two have a cosmic connection ♥️
12th Jun 2022 6:40am
