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Hurt So Beautiful
You heard that song
And recognized yourself.
I wonder if such things
Define us by a mechanism
Of manifest destiny,
Or if we just kind of know,
Even from an early
Age, somehow sending
Messages into the future.
When I hear the song
Now, I think of you; I think
Of those times.
I can feel
The warm summer air
Congeal
Over the skin of my
Soul
And it…
Hurts
So
Beautiful
Published 9th Jun 2022
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9th Jun 2022 6:33pm
A memory song can trigger such powerful emotions, the same as certain aromas, which can drag us back to a place we don't want to go or place we wish to go back to.
You have captured those feelings perfectly here, or as perfect as perfect can be.
Emotive poem. Beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.
You have captured those feelings perfectly here, or as perfect as perfect can be.
Emotive poem. Beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.
10th Jun 2022 10:02am
Such depth of truth, Magdalena...
I am very happy that this
resonated with you...
Much gratitude...
I am very happy that this
resonated with you...
Much gratitude...
11th Jun 2022 11:17pm
Daaammmnn.
It's like you read my mind when it comes to music. How it triggers
memories and emotions. I really love this poem Cipher.
Messages sent to the future!! Just freaking Brilliant!!!
It has the power to do so many things.
Even hurt so beautiful - my favorite!!
It's like you read my mind when it comes to music. How it triggers
memories and emotions. I really love this poem Cipher.
Messages sent to the future!! Just freaking Brilliant!!!
It has the power to do so many things.
Even hurt so beautiful - my favorite!!
12th Jun 2022 7:33am
To read your mind would be
a tome of ineffable beauty, A...
:)
I am so happy this resonated with you...
Twas such a complex thought form
to seek to articulate...
a tome of ineffable beauty, A...
:)
I am so happy this resonated with you...
Twas such a complex thought form
to seek to articulate...
