deepundergroundpoetry.com
just a little tease
You kiss me
like I'm the air
you need to breathe
while you steal my breath
skin electrified
on edge
waiting and ready
for hand and mouths
and ...
But it's all just a tease
my nails down your back
your hand on ass
pulling me close enough
to feel your desire
hard against me
I've never done this before
sworn a promise to not fuck
so instead of holding out
we tease each other
hands everywhere else
but where they want to be
bodies alight with passion
until breathless and aching
I kick you out of bed
and fall asleep to dream
of the things we'll do to each
when this self imposed celibacy
is done
© Indie Adams 2022
like I'm the air
you need to breathe
while you steal my breath
skin electrified
on edge
waiting and ready
for hand and mouths
and ...
But it's all just a tease
my nails down your back
your hand on ass
pulling me close enough
to feel your desire
hard against me
I've never done this before
sworn a promise to not fuck
so instead of holding out
we tease each other
hands everywhere else
but where they want to be
bodies alight with passion
until breathless and aching
I kick you out of bed
and fall asleep to dream
of the things we'll do to each
when this self imposed celibacy
is done
© Indie Adams 2022
Published 6th Jun 2022
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 2
comments 2
reads 647
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
6th Jun 2022 12:56pm
Blue balls has never looked so delightful, Indie.
You perfectly captured your need, your want, and the delicious temptations that are driving you a little mad. IT'S SOOO GOOOD!
You perfectly captured your need, your want, and the delicious temptations that are driving you a little mad. IT'S SOOO GOOOD!
6th Jun 2022 6:45pm
Didn't realise how much a tease it was until I read you were attempting to keep celibate in the midst of desire. Favourite lines for capturing the dilemma:
I've never done this before
sworn a promise to not fuck
so instead of holding out
we tease each other
hands everywhere else
but where they want to be
The next line, "bodies alight with passion" can be misunderstood - it could mean your bodies were inflamed by passion or that one of you alighted on another to do the deed you wanted to resist.
I've never done this before
sworn a promise to not fuck
so instead of holding out
we tease each other
hands everywhere else
but where they want to be
The next line, "bodies alight with passion" can be misunderstood - it could mean your bodies were inflamed by passion or that one of you alighted on another to do the deed you wanted to resist.
