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Oh clarity, thy name is moon...
Probing the sky with golden light
From Szechuan to Saskatoon
On any carefree cloudless night
When coyote song is heard to croon
In between the bats in flight
After their sonar gets in tune
For an efficient insect bite
With mouths more like a fork than spoon
To the keen zookeeper's sight
Which will not be too picayune
If zoologists know how to write
Better than the standard baboon
Passing for a well read troglodyte
Who moonlights with a pet raccoon
Learning laws of copyright!
Probing the sky with golden light
From Szechuan to Saskatoon
On any carefree cloudless night
When coyote song is heard to croon
In between the bats in flight
After their sonar gets in tune
For an efficient insect bite
With mouths more like a fork than spoon
To the keen zookeeper's sight
Which will not be too picayune
If zoologists know how to write
Better than the standard baboon
Passing for a well read troglodyte
Who moonlights with a pet raccoon
Learning laws of copyright!
Published 6th Jun 2022
Author's Note
Sometimes, I just let the rhymes consume me.
April 27th, 2021
April 27th, 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Lol... I absolutely marvel at how very very keen and talented your writer's ability is to be able to rhyme with a word like troglodyte!! 👍🏻 Kudos, indeed.
I've read a few pieces of your work, finding your flow just beautifully pristine. You sincerely don't miss beat... Incredible!
Thank you for sharing your poetic prowess with us, I'm happy you're here.
Thank you for the giggle 🤭 with this one!
🌹 :)
B
I've read a few pieces of your work, finding your flow just beautifully pristine. You sincerely don't miss beat... Incredible!
Thank you for sharing your poetic prowess with us, I'm happy you're here.
Thank you for the giggle 🤭 with this one!
🌹 :)
B
6th Jun 2022 5:08pm
Thank you! That's very kind of you to say and I am very impressed with the community here. It seems like a very supportive bunch so it's good to be here. I see you have over 400 poems so I am trying to catch up. I look forward to reading as much as possible but I fear it will take a while. I mainly focus on sonnets but I'm definitely stoked to check out the diverse and spectacular wordsmithing at play here, and hope to maybe be inspired to try a new form or two. Good times ahead!
