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Planting
Holding the reddish sphere
between my thumb and forefinger,
I remember the smooth-skinned tulip
bulbs we planted last fall.
Their spring colors will never approach
the handsomeness of my lover’s flesh.
My lips press over him with a practiced
pucker, tasting the weeping lips
at the tip of his firm bulb.
Every seed should be
kissed before planting.
between my thumb and forefinger,
I remember the smooth-skinned tulip
bulbs we planted last fall.
Their spring colors will never approach
the handsomeness of my lover’s flesh.
My lips press over him with a practiced
pucker, tasting the weeping lips
at the tip of his firm bulb.
Every seed should be
kissed before planting.
Published 5th Jun 2022
Author's Note
Sometimes gardening puts me in an erotic mood.
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5th Jun 2022 11:59pm
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6th Jun 2022 6:26am
Yes gardening does have sexy connotations, when at end of day it's about fertilisation of seeds. I feel heartwarmed by the fact (if one checks the order of events in Genesis) that Adam found his Eve when he was already in the God given task of tilling and caring for the Garden of Eden perhaps there's a message for us single guys there!. Gardening can make a great chat up topic with the opposite sex..
'Every seed should be kissed before planting' - that sends the thoughts in quite an erotic direction.
'Every seed should be kissed before planting' - that sends the thoughts in quite an erotic direction.
6th Jun 2022 11:59am
Thank you for your thoughts. Yes, the kissing of the bulb was what moved me to the erotic.
6th Jun 2022 1:34pm
Hoi hoi
Every seed?
Yes, apparently it was.
What a sweet loving erotica!
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus
Every seed?
Yes, apparently it was.
What a sweet loving erotica!
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus
You've just deflowered an innocence that has always been associated with gardening.
Now, the next time when that lady is doing the garden it will occur to me that the delicate touch she handles those plants with may not only be for her love of nature but there is much more pleasure that she receives from them.
Keep on dropping those jewels.
Now, the next time when that lady is doing the garden it will occur to me that the delicate touch she handles those plants with may not only be for her love of nature but there is much more pleasure that she receives from them.
Keep on dropping those jewels.
