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Python Prison
Chiseled flesh arms
Slithering around my waist
Not wanting any space
Nuzzling my face
My crushing safety
Of masculine security
Coveting me freely
Making me feel alive
Squeezing just enough
To feel my heart beat
Through muscle and bone
Reminding me I’m not alone
His stiletto beacon
With matching dress
His favorite possession
That hisses fashion
Who wraps me up
In a silk cell
A man made heaven
My Python Prison
Slithering around my waist
Not wanting any space
Nuzzling my face
My crushing safety
Of masculine security
Coveting me freely
Making me feel alive
Squeezing just enough
To feel my heart beat
Through muscle and bone
Reminding me I’m not alone
His stiletto beacon
With matching dress
His favorite possession
That hisses fashion
Who wraps me up
In a silk cell
A man made heaven
My Python Prison
Author's Note
Love strong arms. They remind me of pythons.
Also watched the Salma Hayek scene with the python earlier
- the one From Dusk til Dawn - thanks for that Cypher. LOL
Got inspired to write this.
Yes - no spaghetti arms!!!
Also watched the Salma Hayek scene with the python earlier
- the one From Dusk til Dawn - thanks for that Cypher. LOL
Got inspired to write this.
Yes - no spaghetti arms!!!
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Re. Python Prison
5th Jun 2022 6:32am
Dear A,
Oh yeah! It’s all about the arms. That’s some hot stuff. Hang on, I got distracted for a minute 😊
Not sure why but love the idea of being wrapped in silk cell. There’s quite a bit of sexy tension in this piece that is very subtly infused. For me, I think that’s hard to do and you’ve done it exceptionally well. Hisssssss onward hot stuff. Very enjoyable write. H🌷
Oh yeah! It’s all about the arms. That’s some hot stuff. Hang on, I got distracted for a minute 😊
Not sure why but love the idea of being wrapped in silk cell. There’s quite a bit of sexy tension in this piece that is very subtly infused. For me, I think that’s hard to do and you’ve done it exceptionally well. Hisssssss onward hot stuff. Very enjoyable write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 2:05am
Hi H!!
Right! Strong arms rock!! hahaha
I wanted it to come across as sexy with some tension. I was actually going to use that word instead of fashion. But changed it last minute.
I wanted to put a little of myself in the poem.
Love how strong arms make me feel safe.
Yes, I'm a hugger. LOL
Thanks for the RL and ssssstoping by. LOL
Right! Strong arms rock!! hahaha
I wanted it to come across as sexy with some tension. I was actually going to use that word instead of fashion. But changed it last minute.
I wanted to put a little of myself in the poem.
Love how strong arms make me feel safe.
Yes, I'm a hugger. LOL
Thanks for the RL and ssssstoping by. LOL
Re. Python Prison
5th Jun 2022 8:43am
That imagination of yours A... :)))
This is quite superb...
Establishes the magic with smooth precision...
(This reminded me of...
Well... I was a wrestler at one time,
and we were trained to go "elbow deep" when getting control of an opponent...
I used to incorporate this principle
with this lady I was in a relationship with...
Sort of reaching out, wrapping my arm around her waist,
and pulling her close to me...
Giving her a good squeeze... Making her squeal/squeak/squee a bit...
I don't know that I have thought of that in a while...)
The wordplay in this is just... Immaculate.
Nice, subtle weaving of the snake theme... So so cool...
This is quite superb...
Establishes the magic with smooth precision...
(This reminded me of...
Well... I was a wrestler at one time,
and we were trained to go "elbow deep" when getting control of an opponent...
I used to incorporate this principle
with this lady I was in a relationship with...
Sort of reaching out, wrapping my arm around her waist,
and pulling her close to me...
Giving her a good squeeze... Making her squeal/squeak/squee a bit...
I don't know that I have thought of that in a while...)
The wordplay in this is just... Immaculate.
Nice, subtle weaving of the snake theme... So so cool...
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Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 2:23am
Hey Cipher:)
What can I say I'm a daydreamer. .LOL
My mind wonders and marches to its own drum beat.
I was originally going to name this Pythons & Stilettos ( I just got a python trimmed purse & new black strappy stilettoes.) - but changed it to Python Prison. I wanted to keep it masculine and a bit edgy.
Love strong arms that are defined.
Just does it for me. LOL
Love that I took you to a great memory:)
Mission accomplished!!!
Turning that mind of yours into a movie theater of your own memories.
So thank you for sharing that video with me.!!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by amigo:)
Later undefeated killogator!!
What can I say I'm a daydreamer. .LOL
My mind wonders and marches to its own drum beat.
I was originally going to name this Pythons & Stilettos ( I just got a python trimmed purse & new black strappy stilettoes.) - but changed it to Python Prison. I wanted to keep it masculine and a bit edgy.
Love strong arms that are defined.
Just does it for me. LOL
Love that I took you to a great memory:)
Mission accomplished!!!
Turning that mind of yours into a movie theater of your own memories.
So thank you for sharing that video with me.!!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by amigo:)
Later undefeated killogator!!
Re. Python Prison
5th Jun 2022 12:43pm
Re: Re. Python Prison
Hey Ron!!
Thank you sir:)
Glad you enjoyed this piece!
Been thinking on it for a while just didn't
know how it would come out.
Thanks for the 2 awesomes!!!
Thank you sir:)
Glad you enjoyed this piece!
Been thinking on it for a while just didn't
know how it would come out.
Thanks for the 2 awesomes!!!
Re. Python Prison
5th Jun 2022 1:20pm
This is why I lift weights ...
Beat back the night
Capturing you in my lair
The rest depends on fate ....
BIG LIKE
Beat back the night
Capturing you in my lair
The rest depends on fate ....
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 2:32am
Hi PS!!
I knew you would like this!!!
You should always do your best
to keep that heart pumping and healthy amigo.
I can just imagine your python lair:)
Glad you enjoyed this squeezable poem. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Woop Woop
I knew you would like this!!!
You should always do your best
to keep that heart pumping and healthy amigo.
I can just imagine your python lair:)
Glad you enjoyed this squeezable poem. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Woop Woop
Re. Python Prison
5th Jun 2022 4:11pm
Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 2:34am
Couldn't agree more Tim!!!
Just something I was thinking on and
decided to write it down. Wasn't sure how
it would turn out - glad you enjoyed:)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment buddy:)
Just something I was thinking on and
decided to write it down. Wasn't sure how
it would turn out - glad you enjoyed:)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment buddy:)
Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 3:08am
Just before commenting, I put on three coats, to hide my noodle arms.
So, now as a bulky guy, I will say what an awesome write you did! Luckily I can use my fingers to type this, instead of writing with a big heavy pen that would tire my puny arms out! Lol.
I'm going to write a rebuttal poem about stamina and adrenaline, because I have loads of those!
(No I'm not. Lol.)
Good to see you flexing your literary might!
So, now as a bulky guy, I will say what an awesome write you did! Luckily I can use my fingers to type this, instead of writing with a big heavy pen that would tire my puny arms out! Lol.
I'm going to write a rebuttal poem about stamina and adrenaline, because I have loads of those!
(No I'm not. Lol.)
Good to see you flexing your literary might!
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Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 3:20am
hahahahahahah
still giggling as I'm typing. LOL
No need for the coats. You are mother fucking Styxian - a fighting
sonsabitch!! You are super cool and one of my favs on the site:)
And your biggest muscle is your brain.
You flex in your writing all the time.
Nothing puny about ya amigo:)
Big smile with a great sense of humor - all priceless:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting!!
Later gator
still giggling as I'm typing. LOL
No need for the coats. You are mother fucking Styxian - a fighting
sonsabitch!! You are super cool and one of my favs on the site:)
And your biggest muscle is your brain.
You flex in your writing all the time.
Nothing puny about ya amigo:)
Big smile with a great sense of humor - all priceless:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting!!
Later gator
Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 3:42am
Psst, I'm not exactly a wimp tho. When I was in the biker club, I got in based on backing up one of the bikers against four drug dudes in a bar. Four on one, nope.
After it was over, and the four had backed down, the biker said "you didn't have to do that".
I said "why not, I love this shit!".
I've been in a lot of fights! And pray it's all behind me now.
All these years later, me and him are still brothers.
After it was over, and the four had backed down, the biker said "you didn't have to do that".
I said "why not, I love this shit!".
I've been in a lot of fights! And pray it's all behind me now.
All these years later, me and him are still brothers.
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Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 3:56am
Oh - Where I am at it is motorcycle season. Bikes everywhere!!
Love motorcycles.
You need to check out my poem called
Motorcycles & Mermaids. LOL
Love the sound of a Harley .
Dang - sounds like you are lucky to still be alive.
I have only been in one fight in my life.
Senior year at a party by a bonfire. Very Lord of the Flies moment.
She threw a beer at me and it was on. I am not a fighter.
I'd rather love you - but bitch messed up my shirt. LOL
My best friend was the fighter. Me not so much:)
We got separated. I didn't have a scratch on me - she looked like mess. LOL Styx we were rolling around on the ground - all kinds of
non Adelphina stuff going on. Too funny.
We run into each other now and then and just smile
and keep walking.
Love motorcycles.
You need to check out my poem called
Motorcycles & Mermaids. LOL
Love the sound of a Harley .
Dang - sounds like you are lucky to still be alive.
I have only been in one fight in my life.
Senior year at a party by a bonfire. Very Lord of the Flies moment.
She threw a beer at me and it was on. I am not a fighter.
I'd rather love you - but bitch messed up my shirt. LOL
My best friend was the fighter. Me not so much:)
We got separated. I didn't have a scratch on me - she looked like mess. LOL Styx we were rolling around on the ground - all kinds of
non Adelphina stuff going on. Too funny.
We run into each other now and then and just smile
and keep walking.
Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 4:12am
*Lord of the flies*
What an awesome movie/s. It represents society at its breakdown a bit too well.
Don't fight! Find an equitable rational solution to the differences and agree to disagree....
I'd fight for ya! I'd snatch that bitch up by her neck like a wet cat! Lol.
I love your mini-story! Awesome times, huh!
What an awesome movie/s. It represents society at its breakdown a bit too well.
Don't fight! Find an equitable rational solution to the differences and agree to disagree....
I'd fight for ya! I'd snatch that bitch up by her neck like a wet cat! Lol.
I love your mini-story! Awesome times, huh!
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Re: Re. Python Prison
6th Jun 2022 4:17am
Yes, nowadays I would pull a muscle on my
noodle arms. LOL
Good times!!!
Night night buddy:)
Got another long week at my moms.
I'll be back this weekend!!
Write something kick ass!!!
noodle arms. LOL
Good times!!!
Night night buddy:)
Got another long week at my moms.
I'll be back this weekend!!
Write something kick ass!!!
Re. Python Prison
7th Jun 2022 5:31am
It's soft but strong. I could imagine the feeling of being in that tight embrace of safety and comfort. This is a solid write, nicely penned.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Python Prison
7th Jun 2022 5:42am
Hi LJ!!
Thank you so much for your snaps amiga:)
I'm a hugger so when I'm enveloped in that safety net of arms
it makes me feel comfort. Just wanted to write something about
it and make it interesting to read. LOL
Thanks for the comment and the RL!!
Thank you so much for your snaps amiga:)
I'm a hugger so when I'm enveloped in that safety net of arms
it makes me feel comfort. Just wanted to write something about
it and make it interesting to read. LOL
Thanks for the comment and the RL!!
Re: Re. Python Prison
11th Jun 2022 8:22pm