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I Think of You There
I Think of You There
Unthinkable sleep
Passes you by,
Unable
To quiet
Your mind.
Avoided
As long
As your body
Obeyed
Each flickering
Thought
So unkind.
Not even
An "if"
But restlessly
When,
Uncontrollably
Just given
Straight in,
Finally
Tried,
And given
To ride,
She falters
Her step
To within.
To his lap
She straddles
One leg
Landing
Perfectly bare
As her
Surface
Makes contact
At last,
Hugging
His neck
Until nearly
A wreck
She oscillates
Wind blown
So sweating
To dare.
Until then last
She collapses
Just past
The end
Of where
Sharp thinking
Is whetting,
Honed
On the stone
Of the powerful
Throne
Where both
Heart and her mind
Were begetting.
Unthinkable sleep
Passes you by,
Unable
To quiet
Your mind.
Avoided
As long
As your body
Obeyed
Each flickering
Thought
So unkind.
Not even
An "if"
But restlessly
When,
Uncontrollably
Just given
Straight in,
Finally
Tried,
And given
To ride,
She falters
Her step
To within.
To his lap
She straddles
One leg
Landing
Perfectly bare
As her
Surface
Makes contact
At last,
Hugging
His neck
Until nearly
A wreck
She oscillates
Wind blown
So sweating
To dare.
Until then last
She collapses
Just past
The end
Of where
Sharp thinking
Is whetting,
Honed
On the stone
Of the powerful
Throne
Where both
Heart and her mind
Were begetting.
Published 23rd May 2022
Author's Note
Release is an exhibition of unbridled lust and endless vulnerability.
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23rd May 2022 6:08am
Visualisable scene. Favourite verses (for way they convey moment of union):
To his lap
She straddles
One leg
Landing
Perfectly bare
As her
Surface
Makes contact
At last,
To his lap
She straddles
One leg
Landing
Perfectly bare
As her
Surface
Makes contact
At last,
23rd May 2022 7:16am
There was this one time at band camp....
Actually, at a very open party, a woman simply asked if she could sit in my lap. And, this is what happened. She shut her eyes, and really just went to town. She grabbed my shoulders. Rocked and rubbed back and forth....and then she went into this voodoo dance convulsion orgasm that must have been stored up since forever. It was quite extraordinary. I felt....blessed, bewildered, and somehow gifted. There was something that just struck a chord for her, and I felt like Stone Henge or something. Took her about 15 minutes, and she hung on for dear life. She looked at my face when she was done like we were best friends and I had never seen her before or since. The only words she said were, "Do you mind?" And, "Thank you, Beautiful Man." Who argues with that?
Actually, at a very open party, a woman simply asked if she could sit in my lap. And, this is what happened. She shut her eyes, and really just went to town. She grabbed my shoulders. Rocked and rubbed back and forth....and then she went into this voodoo dance convulsion orgasm that must have been stored up since forever. It was quite extraordinary. I felt....blessed, bewildered, and somehow gifted. There was something that just struck a chord for her, and I felt like Stone Henge or something. Took her about 15 minutes, and she hung on for dear life. She looked at my face when she was done like we were best friends and I had never seen her before or since. The only words she said were, "Do you mind?" And, "Thank you, Beautiful Man." Who argues with that?
24th May 2022 1:33am
There is only one thing that ever seems to quiet my mind... I need it so much! ;)
Just realize you need a lot of endurance and stamina for this ride. :p
I think your author's note sums things up so beautifully.
Just realize you need a lot of endurance and stamina for this ride. :p
I think your author's note sums things up so beautifully.
24th May 2022 2:02am
Well, new to me....
....apparently this was a natural skill set!
Who woulda thunk it?
....apparently this was a natural skill set!
Who woulda thunk it?
