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Well that's a tight piece of sharp passive aggressive on the page.

I love how the syllables vibrate through the ŕead, which is apt for the second to last line and the final word.

Thanks for sharing this. I like it alot 👍 👍

Al

I'd like to share it with my friends over on the Other Side, but daren't!!

i found this little gem quite clever actually

it comes across quite mathematical because t is a symbol that indicates the starting point or a beginning of time in a system which reflects in the time scale of this little poem, i thought it was an interesting approach within a small moment

thank you for sharing 🙂

-ethan

Thank you. I do love it when people pick up these little links, or even find their own! After a month of writing 50+ word poems, I'm enjoying the change.