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On My Way
I was thinking to myself
Maybe I should seek some help
Or maybe I should shoot myself
Everything that's good has gone away
Before I go and end it all
Sorry for what you just saw
Once my blood is on the walls
My regrets in life will go away
This here really is the end
Leave behind the tears of friends
Hope they read this note I send
Let hell know I'm on my way
Maybe I should seek some help
Or maybe I should shoot myself
Everything that's good has gone away
Before I go and end it all
Sorry for what you just saw
Once my blood is on the walls
My regrets in life will go away
This here really is the end
Leave behind the tears of friends
Hope they read this note I send
Let hell know I'm on my way
Published 17th May 2022
| Edited 17th Mar 2023
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22nd May 2022 6:21am
I was really struck with how this reads like a song. It’s very lyrical in its stripped back approach and how it flows effortlessly throughout.
That aside, I wish you nothing but good stuff in regards to the subject matter.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
That aside, I wish you nothing but good stuff in regards to the subject matter.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
7th Oct 2022 4:30am
25th Mar 2023 6:37pm
Hey I hear you and I see this is a post from last year, but I clicked on your profile and want to say I feel like this sometimes and it takes courage to share from vulnerability.
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