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you are more than you see
You are a diamond
and I wish you could see
how bright you shine
every faceted piece of you
worthy
even your dark side
I see your beauty
I see your kindness
I see your pain
hidden behind smiles
you think no one can see through
I see you
and you are amazing
© Indie Adams 2022
and I wish you could see
how bright you shine
every faceted piece of you
worthy
even your dark side
I see your beauty
I see your kindness
I see your pain
hidden behind smiles
you think no one can see through
I see you
and you are amazing
© Indie Adams 2022
Published 16th May 2022
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16th May 2022 1:01am
hello Indie I'm very touched
that you see beauty in me
I don't know where my darkness comes from
it chases a lot of people away
I'm happy you're still with me after all these years...
thank you my dear friend ❤️
that you see beauty in me
I don't know where my darkness comes from
it chases a lot of people away
I'm happy you're still with me after all these years...
thank you my dear friend ❤️
16th May 2022 1:08am
You are one of the loveliest people I know. I feel really lucky to have you as a friend ❤
16th May 2022 4:01am
I truly love to see the respect shared amongst the writers in here. It is very encouraging for all writers to see such examples like this.
Well done, Indie.
Well done, Indie.
16th May 2022 5:06am
Thank you. For the most part I've found DU to be a really supportive community. It's why I've stayed so long. The wonderful people here make it easy to come back.
