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Rebuilding From Sorrow's Ashes
don't
watch me
cry
just
walk
away
the
body racking
sobs
will be
too
much
hugs won't
stem the
sorrow
the sadnees
a river
rapid
my pain
will soon
wash away
then the
gluing
begins
watch me
cry
just
walk
away
the
body racking
sobs
will be
too
much
hugs won't
stem the
sorrow
the sadnees
a river
rapid
my pain
will soon
wash away
then the
gluing
begins
Published 14th May 2022
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14th May 2022 6:22am
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All the wonderful tools to rebuild, once the healing has completed.
Writing, friendship, music, work or a good laugh upon a night out.... All tonic that can help the healing process along.
The poignant brevity speaks volumes in your cleverly ink, Dear C.
Sad but wholly relatable.
Clever title, too!! *wink
🌹 - 💙
B
All the wonderful tools to rebuild, once the healing has completed.
Writing, friendship, music, work or a good laugh upon a night out.... All tonic that can help the healing process along.
The poignant brevity speaks volumes in your cleverly ink, Dear C.
Sad but wholly relatable.
Clever title, too!! *wink
🌹 - 💙
B
14th May 2022 8:12am
14th May 2022 9:51am
14th May 2022 5:16pm
that final stanza
doesn't read (or feel) right with me,
However, stellar spilling, once again, Brother
doesn't read (or feel) right with me,
However, stellar spilling, once again, Brother
14th May 2022 6:53pm
Just cant please some people
seeiously though it felt right to me but it is the reader's own interpretation that comes into play
will try harder next time lol
seeiously though it felt right to me but it is the reader's own interpretation that comes into play
will try harder next time lol
I feel this so much right now
Only try harder on this if it is what fits right for you. ALL of it makes sense to me right now and I’m waiting for the gluing to begin
Only try harder on this if it is what fits right for you. ALL of it makes sense to me right now and I’m waiting for the gluing to begin
22nd May 2022 2:20pm
22nd May 2022 4:43pm
