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"The Best of Dreams"
[quatrains in iambic pentameter]
The best of dreams are those I dream of You,
revealed within our aching hot desire.
Oh, darling one, I love the things you do,
you raise me up and set my soul a’fire.
Your hungry mouth, it wakes my sleeping eyes;
then, travels to a place we know as bliss.
I feel your warm, wet lips there on my thighs,
as stars explode throughout each wondrous kiss.
Inside our veins there flows a molten stream;
deep rocking thrusts, ride like the steed of night,
release all inhibitions from our dream,
as though they’ve risen-up and took to flight.
Our fiery breath leaves trails across the sky,
those silver spangled bedsheets twirl and crease.
In rhythmic flow pearl rivers never dry,
like lovers soaked in passion’s full release.
Two naked flames light up the skies above,
our glow’s a beacon to the world below.
The best of dreams are those with You, my love;
and, these sweet dreams I'm never letting go.
The best of dreams are those I dream of You,
revealed within our aching hot desire.
Oh, darling one, I love the things you do,
you raise me up and set my soul a’fire.
Your hungry mouth, it wakes my sleeping eyes;
then, travels to a place we know as bliss.
I feel your warm, wet lips there on my thighs,
as stars explode throughout each wondrous kiss.
Inside our veins there flows a molten stream;
deep rocking thrusts, ride like the steed of night,
release all inhibitions from our dream,
as though they’ve risen-up and took to flight.
Our fiery breath leaves trails across the sky,
those silver spangled bedsheets twirl and crease.
In rhythmic flow pearl rivers never dry,
like lovers soaked in passion’s full release.
Two naked flames light up the skies above,
our glow’s a beacon to the world below.
The best of dreams are those with You, my love;
and, these sweet dreams I'm never letting go.
Published 6th May 2022
| Edited 16th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Artwork by Andrew Gonzales, gesso on board.
Please, feel free to offer whatever critique you believe will help improve this poem and/or my skills. ✍
Please, feel free to offer whatever critique you believe will help improve this poem and/or my skills. ✍
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7th May 2022 7:47am
The rhythm of this is spectacular. Beat and counter beat merging into a syncopation of rhythm that blends effortlessly with the poem's amorous subject.
Greetings, Sir Ryszard 🌤️
I thank you most humbly and gratefully for selecting this warm little number to read and express such encouraging appreciation of its poetic rhythmic beat, flow, and smooth blending.
I'm honored to be included in your Reading List, as-well! ⁓ Richard🖌
I thank you most humbly and gratefully for selecting this warm little number to read and express such encouraging appreciation of its poetic rhythmic beat, flow, and smooth blending.
I'm honored to be included in your Reading List, as-well! ⁓ Richard🖌
5th Jul 2022 4:20pm
I love waking someone up this way.
Taking them in my mouth, and stimulating the soul...
Circular movements of the tongue to tip...
Hoping it will write in my mouth soon.
And I know it will... It always does eagerly.
Never letting go of your pen...
Taking them in my mouth, and stimulating the soul...
Circular movements of the tongue to tip...
Hoping it will write in my mouth soon.
And I know it will... It always does eagerly.
Never letting go of your pen...
Well, goodness-ME, Kristina 😳
Talk about waking and stimulating one's senses … you've certainly woken mine in such vibrantly, delightful ways.
My "pen" is full 'n ready.
Thank you for such an enthralling treat! ⁓ Richard🖌
Talk about waking and stimulating one's senses … you've certainly woken mine in such vibrantly, delightful ways.
My "pen" is full 'n ready.
Thank you for such an enthralling treat! ⁓ Richard🖌
16th Jan 2024 10:33pm
16th Jan 2024 11:06pm
Thank you, Syr,
That you "love" anything from my pen is praise beyond any I could have expected, but I'm keeping every word. : )
I am ever-so grateful for your inspiring review. ⁓ Richard🖌
That you "love" anything from my pen is praise beyond any I could have expected, but I'm keeping every word. : )
I am ever-so grateful for your inspiring review. ⁓ Richard🖌
