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Un~Snuff  

My pain held your innocence
releasing it after our first kiss
 
Within my darkness,  
you gave me light
 
When I was broken and weak
your soul held on to that one piece
 
Please hold on to our kiss
Its so very deep
I beg of you
 
Release that rage
in our embrace
You have no reason  NOT to let it go
 
Your words on paper  
dry my tears of sorrow
I need you now
 
we are to the other  
what the air wants us to breathe
for everlasting life....
 
Our hearts are no longer dark to care
We now understands whats there
and its what we are together
 
You no longer need to feel fear
throw it away and it will disappear
lets dare the muses here
 
Parts of us in every kiss
a lifetime full of bliss
just give me every last bit.....
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Written by mysteriouslady
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Author's Note
My rebuttle to Slipknots SNUFF.....in my own words...
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