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from a picnic blanket a few arm’s lengths away
Published 29th Apr 2022
Author's Note
“A poem should have the touch ... the way sunlight falls on Braille.” .......silent lotus
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29th Apr 2022 2:07pm
1st May 2022 11:54am
9th May 2022 1:59pm
18th May 2022 4:28pm
My lovely silent lotus, this is indeed a beautiful work of art. Such a wonderful visual that touches the heart. The picnic, the breeze, the sun... Love it!
19th May 2022 4:37pm
dear KristinaX
it's a ray of sunshine when you tiptoe in
thankyuuu for your aura
a warm smile
silent lotus
it's a ray of sunshine when you tiptoe in
thankyuuu for your aura
a warm smile
silent lotus
31st May 2022 3:53pm
My dear friend,
Your poetic voice washes over....the luminescent touch your pen scribes uplifts, warms and creates an atmosphere of wonder and potential
I deeply enjoyed the thought process/provoking you left me with...
That's truly a sign of artistic achievement, imo.
Thank you for sharing your creative tour de force with us 🙏
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Your poetic voice washes over....the luminescent touch your pen scribes uplifts, warms and creates an atmosphere of wonder and potential
I deeply enjoyed the thought process/provoking you left me with...
That's truly a sign of artistic achievement, imo.
Thank you for sharing your creative tour de force with us 🙏
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
19th Jul 2022 7:47pm
dear B
my apologies
for such tardy reply
life required some other focus for a little while
it always does me good to know you’ve loitered with my whispers
and the intricacy of your insights is a special gift
many thankyuus
silent lotus
my apologies
for such tardy reply
life required some other focus for a little while
it always does me good to know you’ve loitered with my whispers
and the intricacy of your insights is a special gift
many thankyuus
silent lotus
