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Mercury Webs
Metal legs
Weaving mercury webs
Casted spells
Sculpting eggs
Of francium cells
Transforming earth
A Maman birth
Weaving mercury webs
Casted spells
Sculpting eggs
Of francium cells
Transforming earth
A Maman birth
Written by
Adelphina
Published 26th Apr 2022
Author's Note
Never done a minimalist poem. Yikes!!
Trying out the mother of spiders comp.
Never done one of those either. LOL
Trying out the mother of spiders comp.
Never done one of those either. LOL
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Re. Mercury Webs
26th Apr 2022 4:17am
It's a challenge, but we think that you rose to the occasion. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. Mercury Webs
26th Apr 2022 4:22am
Well thank you me:)
Cause I honestly have no idea what I am doing. hahaha
You just gave me a boost of confidence - much appreciated.
The picture just spoke to me. Had to respond.
My muse kept bugging me:)
Cause I honestly have no idea what I am doing. hahaha
You just gave me a boost of confidence - much appreciated.
The picture just spoke to me. Had to respond.
My muse kept bugging me:)
Re: Re. Mercury Webs
26th Apr 2022 4:32am
Re. Mercury Webs
26th Apr 2022 6:36am
Dear A,
Well done. Didn’t make me jump in fright and enjoyed the nod to the sculpture bug, and very clever ending. Minimalist poetry is a challenge yet, you’ve written it awesomely. Best of luck in the comp. H🌷
Well done. Didn’t make me jump in fright and enjoyed the nod to the sculpture bug, and very clever ending. Minimalist poetry is a challenge yet, you’ve written it awesomely. Best of luck in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:22am
Hi H!!
Thank you for your snaps. I saw the picture and was hooked
of its grandeur. Got that muse spark and thought of all the cool metal webs it would weave.
Thanks for commenting and stopping my amiga:)
Thank you for your snaps. I saw the picture and was hooked
of its grandeur. Got that muse spark and thought of all the cool metal webs it would weave.
Thanks for commenting and stopping my amiga:)
Re. Mercury Webs
26th Apr 2022 8:11am
dear Adelphina
this short piece has a very nice elemental sinister silk touch to it
quite an impressive 1st time work!
-CIU
this short piece has a very nice elemental sinister silk touch to it
quite an impressive 1st time work!
-CIU
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Re: Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:25am
Hi CIU,
Thank you so much for taking a look at this. This is my first official
minimalist poem. I'm kind of a chatty patty and thought it would be a challenge to do.
I see you as well have entered the
contest and wanted to wish you the best of luck as well.
Thanks for the RL too
Thank you so much for taking a look at this. This is my first official
minimalist poem. I'm kind of a chatty patty and thought it would be a challenge to do.
I see you as well have entered the
contest and wanted to wish you the best of luck as well.
Thanks for the RL too
Re: Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:47am
thats no problem at all
Im a first timer at this kind of work too
wish you all the best with the comp as well
-CIU
Im a first timer at this kind of work too
wish you all the best with the comp as well
-CIU
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Re. Mercury Webs
26th Apr 2022 1:28pm
Re: Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:27am
Hey Amigo!!!
Thought I'd try something different.
Thanks for your snaps amigo and the RL
Woop woop!!
Thought I'd try something different.
Thanks for your snaps amigo and the RL
Woop woop!!
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Re: Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:35am
Hi SB2,
Right!!!! Just left a great impression on me. Thought I'd try it out.
You know me, I'm a talker. 20 words - yikes!!!
Lots of great other poems on it as well. I'm in great company
in this comp.
Thanks for the RL!!!
Nice to hear from ya amigo:)
Right!!!! Just left a great impression on me. Thought I'd try it out.
You know me, I'm a talker. 20 words - yikes!!!
Lots of great other poems on it as well. I'm in great company
in this comp.
Thanks for the RL!!!
Nice to hear from ya amigo:)
Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:32am
Enjoying this minimalist piece, wicked write. Good luck on the competition.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Mercury Webs
28th Apr 2022 4:39am
Hi LJ
What a wonderful comment this is:)
Thank you. 20 words was a challenge for me.
I tend to go on and on and on. LOL
Love the word wicked!!! I should have used that word
in the poem!!! So on point!!
Thanks for you snaps LJ:)
What a wonderful comment this is:)
Thank you. 20 words was a challenge for me.
I tend to go on and on and on. LOL
Love the word wicked!!! I should have used that word
in the poem!!! So on point!!
Thanks for you snaps LJ:)
Re: Re. Mercury Webs
5th May 2022 00:14am
Hi SF
So glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for checking it out and leaving a comment.
So glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for checking it out and leaving a comment.