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Desideratum
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Desideratum
Do we love one another
or need to love?
Often lines are blurred
confusing the two in
our minds. Maybe
that’s part of the
problem. Maybe the 2
should be jumbled up
in our hearts not our
minds. At the very
least, our din should
start there, I think.
There I go again using
my mind as opposed
to feeling first.
We can want to love
needing each other.
Feels right, right?
unique word count: 54
Desideratum
Do we love one another
or need to love?
Often lines are blurred
confusing the two in
our minds. Maybe
that’s part of the
problem. Maybe the 2
should be jumbled up
in our hearts not our
minds. At the very
least, our din should
start there, I think.
There I go again using
my mind as opposed
to feeling first.
We can want to love
needing each other.
Feels right, right?
unique word count: 54
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