it was something about the way you held yourself (an oldie)

Oh my god I love this. Just so much. There’s literally nothing I don’t love about this.

Easy reading list :) Thank you

-M

Ah, thank you Missy. Pleased you like. I chopped off a little here and a little there, it made all the difference. :)

more than air....

So many echos of nearly thereness....

The reverberations of memories....in the rear view mirror of life.

No regrets. It's always good to remember without regrets, but not when I'm driving lol.

Thank you. Good to still see you around these parts. :)

Forgive my late comment.  I meant to comment on this before.  
It is wonderfully brutal with its honesty.  The beginning lines are insane!  
What a great write you have here.  

"Better late than never" as someone said 😁
Thank you so much for reading and your great feedback.

I really like this, and it so beautifully expresses that feeling of looking back, questioning, "were we real, or was it all in my head?"

A few little things:
remembering the stuff you said
it mentioned fucking something to feel alive  ----  "it" as the pronoun here was a little hiccup for me

we are imaginations favourite network ----- imaginations should have an apostrophe, unless it's a style choice to leave it off

while living for the what might be -----  "the" seems out of place


Such a lovely piece, thank you for sharing it :-)

Hi paperstains.
Thank you for taking the time to critique.  I really appreciate it.
I didn't even think about the 'it' . I've used it in my spoken word  so will have to leave as it is.
The apostrophe in 'imaginations' was one that I had to check beforehand . I'm a stickler  for getting those right. The plural came up as, imagination or imaginations

Thank you for spotting that sneaky little,  the. It's not supposed to be there 🤣

Great feedback. It means a lot 😁

The way I'm reading it "favourite network" belongs to imaginations. So the plural possessive would be imaginations' favourite network. But, perhaps I'm reading it incorrectly?

Ah, I get what you're saying. The apostrophe would work in that case. 😁

Glad I could help. :-)

The need for passion / emotion and the hope to find and keep it. When it is not there, our imaginations try to create.

Absolutely Leo.

Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts. Means a lot.