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time

If time
slows down
when
we fall
in love
then
I don't
ever
want the
rain
to stop.

Written by Dreamboy

Published 21st Apr 2022

#cancer #death #depression

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Re. time

Anonymous

21st Apr 2022 9:42pm

Hi DreamBoy,how are you?
This is a short,sweet,powerful piece.
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4th May 2022 1:01am

Thanks for reading but don't ask me how I'm doing because I don't know how to answer in less than forty words.

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Anonymous

4th May 2022 1:07am

That's quite OK!
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