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The space beside
I want to tell you of the blueness of sky
and the sound of geese flying over today
and that scene in a movie that made me cry
and the beautiful song that blew me away
I want to carry you around all day
in the pocket closest to my heart
so we can just laugh and talk and play
and not feel always so far apart
Instead there’s an empty space beside me
I carry it everywhere I roam
I’m complete; it’s not a hole inside me
I just long for connection that feels like home
Author's Note
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My mom once said she always knew I had space beside me for another person. The concept intrigued me.
My mom once said she always knew I had space beside me for another person. The concept intrigued me.
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Re. The space beside
10th Apr 2022 3:57am
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12th Apr 2022 1:52pm
Yes, I suppose it could. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!
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Re. The space beside
10th Apr 2022 7:47am
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12th Apr 2022 1:53pm
Re. The space beside
10th Apr 2022 9:52am
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12th Apr 2022 1:55pm
Very good question.. I guess that's up to the reader! Thanks for taking the time...
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Re. The space beside
10th Apr 2022 1:55pm
Beautifully expressed and interesting. I think many would relate this feeling to being "incomplete." I like that you have a different perspective.
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Re: Re. The space beside
12th Apr 2022 2:01pm
Thank you. I think it's sad that people feel incomplete. I believe we are all whole, and known, and loved, although I have a hard time grasping it myself most days. Other people don't complete us, but they do give us someone to share and connect with - which is the closest thing to a "purpose" that I can think of.
Thank you for reading. 😊
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Thank you for reading. 😊
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Re. The space beside
10th Apr 2022 2:29pm
There's melancholy and some lightness here
One of your best truths of life
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One of your best truths of life
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Re: Re. The space beside
12th Apr 2022 2:03pm
Yes, thank you for perceiving both. There's so much wonder in the world, it demands sharing....
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Re. The space beside
10th Apr 2022 4:33pm
Beautiful entry, K. It is said that two are born from the same pod, separate when born, and eventually find their way back to one another over time. I relate that to this poem.
Well done! Keep up the wonderful work!
Well done! Keep up the wonderful work!
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Re: Re. The space beside
12th Apr 2022 2:13pm
Thanks so much, A!
I have a number of people I keep "in my pocket", so to speak. My mind is rarely quiet; I'm usually talking with someone, and it's not an anonymous force or a Jesus or whatever - it's dear, real friends. In reality, none of them could endure my constant desire for sharing! I do wonder about the "soul mate" concept you mention... I have met a few souls that come close.
Thanks for your thoughts!
❤️k
I have a number of people I keep "in my pocket", so to speak. My mind is rarely quiet; I'm usually talking with someone, and it's not an anonymous force or a Jesus or whatever - it's dear, real friends. In reality, none of them could endure my constant desire for sharing! I do wonder about the "soul mate" concept you mention... I have met a few souls that come close.
Thanks for your thoughts!
❤️k
Re. The space beside
11th Apr 2022 6:09pm
Dear K,
Oh the haunting beauty of this piece is overwhelming. To me, it’s that soul beside me that knows all before I even have to think it. We can cry, laugh, admire, without the intrusion of language other than just being connected. Love this. H🌷
Oh the haunting beauty of this piece is overwhelming. To me, it’s that soul beside me that knows all before I even have to think it. We can cry, laugh, admire, without the intrusion of language other than just being connected. Love this. H🌷
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12th Apr 2022 2:14pm
Oh, that is a beautiful image, H.... I love it! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
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Re. The space beside
18th Jun 2022 1:05pm
Enjoyed the poem and the space besides concept. I feel as if I'm a different person when there is someone in the space, versus when it is empty. May you find your confidant.
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