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Late Night Loving
It's quiet here at last: the music's stopped;
And so has all your movement, save the chest
That rises up, then falls, as you repose;
You're deep in sleep and your pupils are locked
Away until the morning; this is best
For me as well: the ticking clock just goes
On through the night; its sound will not be blocked
Out by my conscious mind that can't divest
Itself of these nocturnal thoughts; suppose
I slid my face down to your groin and stocked
My mouth with turgid flesh that I find blessed
With life despite somnolence: see - it grows
And hardens as I suck and lick - a riot
Of tensions here at night, when all is quiet
And so has all your movement, save the chest
That rises up, then falls, as you repose;
You're deep in sleep and your pupils are locked
Away until the morning; this is best
For me as well: the ticking clock just goes
On through the night; its sound will not be blocked
Out by my conscious mind that can't divest
Itself of these nocturnal thoughts; suppose
I slid my face down to your groin and stocked
My mouth with turgid flesh that I find blessed
With life despite somnolence: see - it grows
And hardens as I suck and lick - a riot
Of tensions here at night, when all is quiet
Author's Note
just the morning after the night before - please don't "borrow" these verses
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2nd Apr 2022 1:44pm
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2nd Apr 2022 2:10pm
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2nd Apr 2022 1:51pm
What a way to wake, that truly is rise n shine
Great piece
Love and light
Ron xx
Great piece
Love and light
Ron xx
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2nd Apr 2022 2:12pm
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2nd Apr 2022 2:48pm
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2nd Apr 2022 10:08pm
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2nd Apr 2022 8:24pm
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3rd Apr 2022 8:03am
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2nd Apr 2022 10:07pm
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2nd Apr 2022 10:11pm
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Great pleasure to wake up to. You also to a beautiful smart strong sexy naked person. Keep on writing.
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3rd Apr 2022 8:04am
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3rd Apr 2022 8:05am
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You have a wonderful way of being succinct while providing a vibrant word palate. The physique of a lover is a most pleasant source of inspiration.
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10th Apr 2022 8:36pm
It really helps to get feedback like this - to allow one to amplify strengths in future works
Re. Late Night Loving
1st May 2022 7:57am
so much can be curated from the essence of waking up next to the gorgeous soul you’ve decided to share this experience with. it’s captivating to simply bask in the presence of the product created by both of your existence in each other’s lives.
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1st May 2022 9:24am
Thank you for the thoughtful comment - your perspective is very interesting