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Control
I wish I had more control
over my own life
Right now I'm just surfing
the waves of whatever
comes my way
over my own life
Right now I'm just surfing
the waves of whatever
comes my way
Published 22nd Mar 2022
| Edited 24th Mar 2022
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22nd Mar 2022 9:57am
Dear S,
How completely human this feels to me. I so relate to this feeling and what a great metaphor of describing the situation. Maybe I should just ride the wave and see where it goes? Fantastic expression of trying to work things out. H🌷
How completely human this feels to me. I so relate to this feeling and what a great metaphor of describing the situation. Maybe I should just ride the wave and see where it goes? Fantastic expression of trying to work things out. H🌷
24th Mar 2022 6:45pm
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2022 11:08am
Hi Simon, hope ur well?
Short,2 the point,and relatable.
Great!
X
Short,2 the point,and relatable.
Great!
X
24th Mar 2022 6:45pm
Anonymous
24th Mar 2022 7:00pm
Hi Simon,yeah,doing OK.
Its evening time here in UK. So relaxing.
X
Its evening time here in UK. So relaxing.
X
25th Mar 2022 2:28pm
I believe our timezones are only an hour apart. Only difference is the Season.
