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Do You Remember
Do you remember just fooling around
And not wanting to leave because
We were happy and content with each other and we found home,
For the first time in a long time?
Do you remember all of the messages back and forth
And pissing off our friends
And laughing, running out the school doors into the afternoon?
Do you remember all of the stupid little fights
That were so funny and still are and I wish
We were still close.
I miss you, Big Brother.
So I'll ask you this:
Do you remember?
And not wanting to leave because
We were happy and content with each other and we found home,
For the first time in a long time?
Do you remember all of the messages back and forth
And pissing off our friends
And laughing, running out the school doors into the afternoon?
Do you remember all of the stupid little fights
That were so funny and still are and I wish
We were still close.
I miss you, Big Brother.
So I'll ask you this:
Do you remember?
Published 22nd Mar 2022
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22nd Mar 2022 12:14pm
Dear A,
So touching a poem. It made me recall events like this in my own family. Poignant and elegant in expression. H🌷
So touching a poem. It made me recall events like this in my own family. Poignant and elegant in expression. H🌷
24th Mar 2022 3:41am
Dear H,
Thank you so much! I'm glad I'm not alone in this feeling, and I hope you have a nice week.
From,
A
Thank you so much! I'm glad I'm not alone in this feeling, and I hope you have a nice week.
From,
A
