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LIKE THE SUN IN ITS GLORY
My woman is the sky goddess:
Her eyes are sky blue.
When her breasts (potentially) fill with milk,
It's as though I see the clouds of the sky.
And her Vagina, when it is radiant, it becomes like the sun in its glory.
As i lay on my back on the bed,
And she strips down and squats on my face,
Its like the sun descending to the earth at long last !!
Oh the thrill we share,
as we enjoy the beauty of the (human) sunset together !!
Her eyes are sky blue.
When her breasts (potentially) fill with milk,
It's as though I see the clouds of the sky.
And her Vagina, when it is radiant, it becomes like the sun in its glory.
As i lay on my back on the bed,
And she strips down and squats on my face,
Its like the sun descending to the earth at long last !!
Oh the thrill we share,
as we enjoy the beauty of the (human) sunset together !!
Published 17th Mar 2022
| Edited 6th Apr 2022
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Let the sun go down on our love not our anger, this poem says in an erotic way. (Poignantly, I have just been reading in my morning Bible study Jesus quoting the 'they shall become one flesh' injunction when answering the Pharisees' question on divorce.)
19th Mar 2022 6:37am
I am writing fiction here. For "my woman" is a position that is vacant at present. But a man can dream, can't he. There are 3 aspects of the sky here: the blueness, the whiteness of the clouds, plus the warmth of the sun. Well, a fourth aspect would be the traveling of the sun. Anyway, i try to link all four to a woman. I dont know why this piece came upon me just today. I mean i could have had the idea long before now. Well actually i wrote it in connection to my sending a birthday card to a female friend - no real physical contact. Just telephone connection.
