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Fatigues
We camouflage our felling,
And act brand new.
But my eyes really turn blue
When my heart can’t find you.
And act brand new.
But my eyes really turn blue
When my heart can’t find you.
Published 8th Mar 2022
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9th Mar 2022 3:13am
Dear U,
Unrequited love is the pits. I think you’ve written a very lovely poem on such a hard emotion. I enjoyed the gentle rhyming as well. H🌷
Unrequited love is the pits. I think you’ve written a very lovely poem on such a hard emotion. I enjoyed the gentle rhyming as well. H🌷
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
11th Mar 2022 3:38am
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