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Hatred
You’re so far gone
I’m closer to The Moon
But I have this one photo
Of when you loved me too
I’m closer to The Moon
But I have this one photo
Of when you loved me too
Published 23rd Feb 2022
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24th Feb 2022 2:52pm
Dear U,
For me, when I reads this I had a hollow feeling of holding a photo knowing how much I loved someone who just wouldn’t love me back. Your poem has captured this magnificently. H🌷
For me, when I reads this I had a hollow feeling of holding a photo knowing how much I loved someone who just wouldn’t love me back. Your poem has captured this magnificently. H🌷
