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Wonder
Enfolding or unfolding -
some strange activity,
which felt like... An
awakening?
Took place in a
mysterious space,
realized in a breath
and an increase of pace/
slash/ blush to my
face in my
merry scary
darkness.
Watching movies
with romance,
thinking
of the
chance
of
dice -
I was watching
Shakespeare’s Romeo & Juliet…
Feeling
Friar Laurence
like…
[Philosophizing
in a green
house.]
I listened to Romeo’s
mother describe his:
Artificial darkness,
which I had just written of, the day prior:
And I began to wonder.
Published 1st Mar 2022
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2nd Mar 2022 4:32am
Dear CO,
For me this piece was a cacophony of scary and not scary movie scenes. I like the way I perceived your writing almost like a tennis match of back and forth with my visions of funny and scary movies. The closing line is rather cool because in ending my visual tour with this poem I wondered just how off I truly am? As per, I always enjoy my ride reading your work! H🌷
For me this piece was a cacophony of scary and not scary movie scenes. I like the way I perceived your writing almost like a tennis match of back and forth with my visions of funny and scary movies. The closing line is rather cool because in ending my visual tour with this poem I wondered just how off I truly am? As per, I always enjoy my ride reading your work! H🌷
2nd Mar 2022 8:23am
