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Caress & Kiss
I had this idea, once -
to write a tome of love
for one that was merely
a phantom, external
to the shadows of my
mind, yet incorporated
in the design, so that
one day they might know
that I knew before I
knew, that I had always
known, as they appeared
before they appeared -
looming over closed
eyes ellipses, in a
hemisphere of beauty,
like visitations of
an unattainable dream -
laced with a grace,
and… something like
forgiveness… for everything:
for my
insanity
&
madness,
as she…
Hovered over me
in oval, all seeing orbs
as my eyes closed further…
reaching for her -
as she steeped me in stillness
reaching out to me
In
A
Caress
&
Kiss
Published 1st Mar 2022
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1st Mar 2022 12:00pm
Hi Cipher_0,how are you?
I like this,particularly--
"That I knew before I knew,
that I had always known,
as they appeared,
before they appeared", line.
It reminds me of something I've heard before.
Nevertheless,its good!
X
I like this,particularly--
"That I knew before I knew,
that I had always known,
as they appeared,
before they appeared", line.
It reminds me of something I've heard before.
Nevertheless,its good!
X
2nd Mar 2022 8:28am
Anonymous
1st Mar 2022 12:36pm
impactful, vulnerable and wonderfully accepting.... I deeply appreciate the sense of a love letter sent out into the universe... to inform the idea of someone... their essence of your own.... a beautiful notion.
So remarkably moving and creatively stirring.
🌹 - B
x
So remarkably moving and creatively stirring.
🌹 - B
x
2nd Mar 2022 8:33am
Thank you B.
:)))
I had the idea of a companion piece for this,
which was sort of...
This Book of Love was written
without being physically written...
And I began to discover
each page, with each moment with this phantom...
A phantom in a state of revealing?
Like...
Recognizing that you knew someone
from a previous life?
That's pretty heavy...
I get these flashes and experience
Deja vu by default...
but...
I have the will to be strange...
So...
Thank you for this beautiful
comment, B.
:)))
I had the idea of a companion piece for this,
which was sort of...
This Book of Love was written
without being physically written...
And I began to discover
each page, with each moment with this phantom...
A phantom in a state of revealing?
Like...
Recognizing that you knew someone
from a previous life?
That's pretty heavy...
I get these flashes and experience
Deja vu by default...
but...
I have the will to be strange...
So...
Thank you for this beautiful
comment, B.
2nd Mar 2022 3:55am
I love when writing and feeling it on a whole different level.
Knowing in an unspoken profound way - the ink flows cause it knows
you and your secrets.
This is going to be wonderful for you to gift when the
time is write amigo:)
Knowing in an unspoken profound way - the ink flows cause it knows
you and your secrets.
This is going to be wonderful for you to gift when the
time is write amigo:)
2nd Mar 2022 8:36am
I see a prompt there, A.
[Knowing in an unspoken profound way - the ink flows cause it knows
you and your secrets.]
That's way heavy...
Makes me think.
Completely Awesomazing...
:)))
[Knowing in an unspoken profound way - the ink flows cause it knows
you and your secrets.]
That's way heavy...
Makes me think.
Completely Awesomazing...
:)))
